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(I apologize for the quality of this write. I know it's a little cliche, but that's kind of the point. I'm struggling to get back in the groove and needed to post SOMETHING!)




Broken bones and dark whispers don’t compare to her scars
She’s been longing for something beyond what she can have
But she can only reach so far

Every time she glances back, her life distorts into a hundred other’s dreams
Every face cries the same tears into the same stream

Is it her fantasy to be here or is it only fate
The blackness soon appears as blood runs down her face
A million others fall, each piece shattered into space
Each one writes a poem about each other’s riven state

Echoed cries and hollow screams, keep waiting for the end
We’ve seen the scene too many times and don’t realize
Most don’t live it, they just pretend

Every time she sees herself, only her reflection sees what she wants to see
A truth that she’ll never know she can be

Is it her fantasy to be here or is it only fate
The blackness soon appears as blood runs down her face
A million others fall, each piece shattered into space
Each one writes a poem about each other’s riven state

(She can’t run and she can’t heal and she can’t die but she can feel this)




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On Tuesday April 26th, 2005, An Expired Member (4) writes:
i love this, its great. -kit_kat


On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:
vary nice piece, i enjoyed it vary much.~~~Grave


On Wednesday February 18th, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (384) writes:
Not cliche at all! It was perfectly original, the description amazing. Just amazing. I loved it. ~Wish Upon A Star


On Monday February 16th, 2004, Sinnocence (53) writes:
i agree with everything said before me. this is one of your best in my personal opinion. *hugs* thank you for writing something i can relate to


On Monday February 16th, 2004, stitchedheart (22) writes:
*sobbing quietly* i love it. *wipes tears* its so sweet. do not apologize for the quality, this is an excellent piece. *adds to favorites* ~angel


On Monday February 16th, 2004, suicideseason (2101) writes:
*smiles*Bravo!


On Monday February 16th, 2004, Twilight (2082) writes:
i sont find this clcihe at all nemo!! i think it is damn sweet in fact. yay for this work!!


On Saturday March 6th, 2004, Twilight (2082) writes:
i was a speechless bufoon before. i can only say this is completely touching and relevently beautiful. keep up the uncredible pieces nemo..you amaze me every time.


On Monday February 16th, 2004, Stellar (47) writes:
"Every time she sees herself, only her reflection sees what she wants to see A truth that she’ll never know she can be" That's awesome, you have to think for a second to really understand it. This poem is sad but elegant at the same time, very nice.


On Sunday February 15th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:
this is good. It's not that cliche, I liked it *~Hope~*



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