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Silver Spyder

Under the man-made stars
Her silhouette left silver dust
As she danced so quickly,
Her waltz so feline
I marked her as mine,
And she marked all
She treaded upon
The city air could not touch us,
Yet it blew light kisses
In hopes of being noticed

We found release in 137MPH runs
With no ceiling to hide under
Passing pairs of red eyed demons
That could only blink in astonishment
We spun our web through the streets
And called them our home
The night was ours to own
The city under an Eclipse.

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On Monday December 8th, 2003, Recycled (161) writes:

"That could only blink in astonishment" "We spun our web through the streets" These were great lines. The entire piece was a pleasure to read.

On Thursday November 20th, 2003, An Expired Member (14) writes:

So enchanting...ugh, you're making me think too much, such a unique style and done so well, brain freeze...amazing-Siva

On Wednesday November 19th, 2003, Twilight (2082) writes:

the way you write is so different. you are definitely progressing. and i think its awesome. i fyou tried i think your stuff could be published.

On Tuesday November 18th, 2003, An Expired Member (61) writes:

enchanting beyond description... loved the comparison.

On Monday October 27th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (617) writes:

Beautiful! You've unloaded the full enchantment of that very city night onto paper. I love the way you describe everything in...such elaborate style. It gives this an absolutely rich and full feelings. Wonderful~JMDW~

On Monday October 27th, 2003, OLd SouL (832) writes:

thanks for the ride.

On Sunday October 26th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

"We spun our web through the streets And called them our home"...you made of this write a warm and blissful experience....you can always put beauty into words.

On Sunday October 26th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:

I love this work of yours nemo,..it is a bit darker and surely deeper in erotic undertones than usual...like a rare fine wine..I supped...and thoroughly enjoyed...great job!

On Sunday October 26th, 2003, manywalks (947) writes:

Utter beauty dripped from your soul to stain the page with these words, ~ mw

On Saturday October 25th, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis (603) writes:

That is some kind of beauty. I agree with miseria your work is truely amazing.

On Saturday October 25th, 2003, Sinnocence (53) writes:

i always loved the way you piece words together. the "flow" in your works is amazing. this one left me with a mental image of such beauty i cannot desribe it! great job!

On Saturday October 25th, 2003, An Expired Member (9) writes:

youre a natural! like the movie "The Natural" with Robert Redford. the one about baseball. HI YO!

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