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Forever and Ever

Sweating sadness
Earthquake shivers
Purging from thoughts of infinity

Crying screams
Helpless distractions
What happens to all of the meanings?

We crept from the shadows of nothing
To taste the sweetest offering
To only find that we will lose it all in the end

My heart aches at the simplicity
My stomach turns wild with anger
I’m so alone, but it only gets worse

What really matters to us?

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On Friday December 31st, 2004, alone (199) writes:

I know how you feel

On Saturday June 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (38) writes:

I love the end. it brings it together well.

On Monday September 22nd, 2003, Twilight (2101) writes:

awesome...a flawless piece form one of DP's legends of amazing talent. you should have your own book.

On Wednesday November 19th, 2003, Twilight (2101) writes:

that was such a corny comment. but i do belive you can take your work much further...you could sell it. but then again, i think a true writer stays underground. i dont think you need to prove anything to anyone.

On Thursday September 11th, 2003, manywalks (950) writes:

Perhaps when we can answer that we can finally move on to the next trek of the journey our souls take. ~ mw

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

You can always make my heart skip a beat....this has really inspired me to think beyond of what really matters...beautiful write!

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, worm (131) writes:

descriptive sadness... questioning our own self worth... hands down, this one is a "9"... excellent!

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, OLd SouL (837) writes:

Great freakin' job. I really enjoyed reading this.

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, urbanhumility (1366) writes:

your quandry of the intangible is what i find that i like of your prose, a simple but articulate and far reaching quandry, bravo my friend ........urban

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

that perhaps is what our lifetimes are for, perhaps when we reach our end that is when we will know? -kryz

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, Sinnocence (53) writes:

wow, this gave me a feeling of real insignificance. that might not have been the intention but any piece that gives me a feeling is good :)

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:

That question burns in the back of mind. Though I have not felt the pain from it...yet...

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:

But Im sure this poem is about more then a question...

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, Aurora_Light (574) writes:

there is a question i wish to know the answer to and at the same time i dont for so many reasons. great write

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