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Reach (My Internal)

The casualty was left for dead
Her home a hundred miles away
Still these thoughts and words unsaid
All her memories decay

Watching lonely from all this mess
Blood and tears fare thee well
Await the torture I can’t miss
My internal will never exist

An anonymous girl died today
She was mine but we’ll never know it
Still searching to find a better way
Self destroyed for feeling the same

Caught in a dream without a meaning
She cried out for someone to show
How could I know there was more to being
But I guess I will never know...

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On Friday September 17th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:

"Caught in a dream without a meaning She cried out for someone to show How could I know there was more to being But I guess I will never know... " i like that :D

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Twilight (2082) writes:

the end of this poem was well done...it brought it to a close with depth and meaning

On Thursday July 31st, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:

I really like the way you build your poems, the structure is really impressive. I like it very much! {dia}

On Wednesday July 30th, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:

There is a tender saddness about this, the never knowing and the sorrow combined beautifully..........O.

On Tuesday July 29th, 2003, pessum ire animus (73) writes:

ive never been much on comments... dont know what to put... except... that i know where this comes from...

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