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Lost Chance

Her beauty so energizing
My love left immortalizing
Together so intensifying
But our hearts were afraid to speak

Her eyes were inescapable
And her touch was irreplaceable
Together so sensational
But our differences made us weak

Entranced
by
her
flame

I
would
give
all
without
shame

If
I
could
just
call
her
name

...But I’ll only find her in sleep

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On Saturday August 30th, 2003, Nadir (619) writes:

Ahh yes. Very calming indeed. Great work. Tiger

On Wednesday July 23rd, 2003, hate_doll (328) writes:

this was as soft as silk to my mind, very lovely. brava :)

On Monday July 21st, 2003, alone (199) writes:

wow...this one was truly amazing you took my breath away once again awsome job!

On Friday July 18th, 2003, An Expired Member (51) writes:

mmm....-speechless-lovely ..truly lovely

On Thursday July 10th, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:

that rhyming pattern is really awesome. and the meter isnt messed up! YAAAAAY!!!!! -B

On Thursday July 10th, 2003, urbanhumility (1362) writes:

taken through the feeling, showing us what is truly felt; then letting darkness fall, showing a dark parallel......well done my friend...urban

On Thursday July 10th, 2003, Twilight (2101) writes:

i felt the flow of this so well i was practically singing it to myself. well written. keep it up!

On Wednesday July 9th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

this a calming fantasious write..i got caught in it...and lost myself...simply lovely.

On Wednesday July 9th, 2003, manywalks (950) writes:

Such a soft and flowing piece of beauty.

On Tuesday July 8th, 2003, pessum ire animus (73) writes:

im captivated by this. the first part.... amazing... great work.

On Tuesday July 8th, 2003, SourInnocence (14) writes:

that was beautiful. i really enjoyed that. i think i have to add it as a fav.

On Tuesday July 8th, 2003, Aurora_Light (574) writes:

hmm...i like this sad and yet it's not in a way (does that make any sence?) i hope u find her in ur dreams

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