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(You will need to highlight this piece to see the depth of the poem. Once again, I am experimenting. Please comment.)

Peering through my thoughts, while flying above
Down below
there’s only drugs between friendships
Everyone is so high, but they still can’t see me
Arms open wide I reach, oh how I reach…

All that returns is a wind of graphite
smoke
They see the face behind the hands and drift
with gravity
I remember the many times I flew alongside
another
But they always feathered down...

It’s hard to see through the chalky air, the clouds are deep
I fly higher, but the air becomes
no more than a single thread
So hard to
breath, but the angry clouds grow thicker
I can’t go higher, but below means to
suffocate

Keep holding on…





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On Wednesday July 23rd, 2003, hate_doll (328) writes:
I love how you played around with the colors and the conept bew me away. Killer :)


On Monday June 23rd, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
Wicked!


On Tuesday June 10th, 2003, The_Unspoken (7) writes:
Great idea. I don't think i've seen something done like that before.


On Thursday June 5th, 2003, Twilight (2101) writes:
this was awesome. it looks crazy too. very good and extremely inventive and creative. keep it up.


On Friday May 30th, 2003, An Expired Member (18) writes:
Wow, that is very inventive. I love it. Its definitly a great write. I love the subject of the write as well. Nicely done. thx ~evil_bitch~


On Friday May 30th, 2003, manywalks (950) writes:
I think your experiment worked, clicked on a couple of different levels. ~ mw


On Wednesday May 28th, 2003, changed_angel (59) writes:
i liked your experimentation with the whole highlighting thing....


On Wednesday May 28th, 2003, Creation_Peace (50) writes:
Through my thoughts there are* only drugs. Smoke with another. No more breath: suffocate.--Interesting arrangement--Farelight


On Wednesday May 28th, 2003, alone (199) writes:
Brilliant! SImply amazing...omg i love your work! you simply amaze me...i adore you!


On Wednesday May 28th, 2003, An Expired Member (36) writes:
Wow thats awesome. I really liked how you did that, very original.


On Wednesday May 28th, 2003, Aurora_Light (574) writes:
me like very much



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