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"Forever a Secret" by Midnight Phoenix

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When you dream do you look up at the sky
And watch the clouds pass you by
And soon you find yourself with nothing

Are your barefeet lifted from the grass
Can you feel the wind slip passed
Maybe this is the end of everything

But how would you ever know
If it's a sign or some strange secret
That is trying to tell you... It's trying to tell you

And would you care to find out
Is there a deeper meaning
That it's trying to tell you... It's trying to tell you

When you awake do you look up at the wall
As if there is nothing there at all
And soon you find yourself at an ending

Does your heart beat pause and then drum fast
Would you tell me if I asked
I'm hoping this is the beginning

But how would you ever know
If it's a sign or some strange secret
That is trying to tell you... It's trying to tell you

And would you care to find out
Is there a deeper meaning
That it's trying to tell you... It's trying to tell you to go



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On Wednesday February 4th, 2004, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:
I LIKE!


On Wednesday October 8th, 2003, OLd SouL (837) writes:
GREAT write. I freakin' love your style.


On Wednesday October 8th, 2003, An Expired Member (21) writes:
it's....wow....great stuff.


On Wednesday September 17th, 2003, An Expired Member (20) writes:
I would like to hear this piece to music, loud music perhaps, good stuff dude, keep it up, you make me wish I could find the words to express things the way that you do.


On Thursday June 5th, 2003, Twilight (2101) writes:
of all the comment here i doubt mine will make a difference...but this is amazing. as usual.~twilight~


On Tuesday May 13th, 2003, alone (199) writes:
I can't even find the words....I love it!


On Tuesday May 13th, 2003, Armand (73) writes:
spoiling your readers with your usual free flowing, memorable images. i expect that your music will be remembered for its quotable lyrics. please correct the spelling to "secret" - the only blemish on an otherwise beautiful piece.


On Monday May 12th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
bravo. I find it to be trully amazing and full of genuine feelings! I like it muchly!


On Monday May 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:
wow that is truley amazing and inspiring. awsome job


On Monday May 12th, 2003, urbanhumility (1362) writes:
a beautiful and internal piece, well written.................urban


On Monday May 12th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
this is my favorite from you...seems like a damn good lyric-poem....congrats on the magnificent write!


On Monday May 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:
This poem is amamzing! I really like it! Good Job!!


On Sunday May 11th, 2003, blackdarkness (311) writes:
wow this left me speachless for a while...i loved it good write



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