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"Across the Crescent Sadness" by Midnight Phoenix

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Across the crescent sadness
I have looked and I have seen
And all I really wished for
Was a glimpse of the sullen scene

How could I have known about the
Enchanting and mournful race
Their hypnotism pacified me
And placed a frown upon my face

Now I’m living naked
No feeling will ever touch me
A melancholy curse has melted my heart
Into puddles beneath my feet

Then the people of sadness
Chanted and fed me pain
A dark force tore at my soul
And my eyes began to rain

Clouds had formed across the sky
As they sang their words of call
I looked up to see the tears
And blood enter their sacred fall

But now I’m dying naked
And all the feeling has washed away
Still dazed and feeling guilty
I collapse into the puddle beneath my feet




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On Thursday August 28th, 2003, An Expired Member (50) writes:
*wipes away tear* you're very talented, keep writing, keep writing, keep writing away...


On Tuesday June 10th, 2003, manywalks (950) writes:
You never fail to amaze me with the beauty and grace of your work, I feel gluttonous dining on your words. ~ mw


On Thursday June 5th, 2003, Twilight (2101) writes:
my god...does talent get any better then this? it couldnt...its not possible. you ever stop writing and i will hunt you down!!! ~twilight~


On Tuesday May 13th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
THIS IS AWESOME!! just my thoughts in your words..."How could I have known about the Enchanting and mournful race Their hypnotism pacified me And placed a frown upon my face"...this is so insightful and so right...


On Tuesday May 13th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
"Now I’m living naked No feeling will ever touch me A melancholy curse has melted my heart Into puddles beneath my feet"...i can relate 100%...this poem rocks!!


On Thursday May 1st, 2003, CrestFallenSky (35) writes:
this is very good, you've created a somber feeling in the flow of the words... keep writing ~CFS



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