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"Eye-less Echo's At Dusk" by Mylissa

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Days disease hours as
thoughts of you cross my
mind. like eye-less echo’s, that dig
end-less pits to the center of my heart.

I long to touch your
skin, lick a kiss, as
you penetrate my body, but
it is reality that fades the dream.

 
…you are but a whisper on my lips
escaping the grasp of my reaching hand…

as apathy is a tower
that builds itself to the heavens,
so we may kneel before our creator
eliminating the situation devouring us.

and when you are finally mine…

we will have nothing-ness
{except} torched, charred remains.
mountains reduced to rubble. oceans
dry as sand. and skies that blot the sun.

twisting dust between our vertebrae.
spines intertwine...life-less love spawn in death.




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On Thursday June 28th, 2007, stormtalk (915) writes:
jeopardy contestant: "what is... deathsex?"


On Friday May 11th, 2007, sixsixnine (446) writes:
i like what you did here it really enhanced my trip*** thank u.


On Friday May 11th, 2007, jack paper (215) writes:
when you are finally mine... in death... love trancending... death embracing... i'm impressed


On Thursday May 3rd, 2007, An Expired Member (24) writes:
Sometimes the craving of something is so much more than actuality. The crescendo builds so much that it inevitably ends in anti-climax. A very vivid portrayal... beautiful use of words.


On Sunday April 29th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
stylistically you pound the sensory division with a strange offbeat poetic notion, much like a mixture of surrela art and bodily exploration...the opening line is freah and allows the poem to open up


On Sunday April 29th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
poor spelling spoiler* I'm not very good at checking my boxes before I hit enter.....excuse my duffles


On Sunday April 29th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
even more typical subject matter like love is given a different treatment, a voyage of immense intensity and yet delicacy...how you do this I don't know, but that's what makes anartist brilliant...just their ability to 'effect' and that's what you seem to


On Sunday April 29th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
give...and it helps a person like me to review it more easily when there is more to possibly say than "oh wow, well done"....exemplary ability to get beneth the skin....OH WOW!! :p (joke)


On Thursday July 19th, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:
I miss you! Mr. Hatter. heheheh :oP


On Thursday April 26th, 2007, An Expired Member (5) writes:
sex and dark. always makes for a thrilling read. nicely done. off to read more


On Monday April 23rd, 2007, carlosjackal (1614) writes:
Dark, dark desires abound in this write and another excellent poem from the pen of Mighty Mylissa. *MWAH!* Wonderful, darling!


On Friday April 20th, 2007, Tonights Decision (173) writes:
truly, you write with needles.. I fell... into the endless yearning and there are towers..


On Wednesday April 18th, 2007, Disassembly Boy (101) writes:
Beautiful write as always.. I especially enjoyed the last lines.. :)


On Tuesday April 17th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1171) writes:
*twisting dust between our vertebrae* that had me


On Monday April 16th, 2007, unspeakable truth (154) writes:
Wow indeed! Dark and yet the words weave and scream passion.


On Sunday April 15th, 2007, heartdripsblack (769) writes:
wow. ~ saddened.


On Saturday April 14th, 2007, Ainsof (1729) writes:
a deathly love... necrosexy! I wanna slowly lick the whisper from your charred remains.... awesome!


On Wednesday April 11th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
woah I didn't see you post this let me read it missy...hmm...


On Wednesday April 11th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
another drop into the poetry paradise that flickers ghostly dark and luminous light...very beautifully expressed and resounding madam


On Wednesday April 11th, 2007, Tania (318) writes:
Dark and passionate.i loved it.


On Wednesday April 11th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1171) writes:
a flower blooms into springs grey wounds. you are a destructionist, very passionate.


On Tuesday April 10th, 2007, LOKI (276) writes:
So dark yet passionate imagery.I liked this one alot.Makes me daydream to read it.Very nice.


On Tuesday April 10th, 2007, Lynaes (1148) writes:
So much aching, yearning in this.. "escaping the grasp of my reaching hand.".. your words play with my heart, Ben & Jerry squad member. *huggles*


On Monday April 9th, 2007, Sin (1652) writes:
you my dear twist words into art...and i always get this image of two bodies blending together..crawling beneathe eachothers skins just to feel complete..gah you steal my breath ~kristy


On Saturday April 14th, 2007, Sin (1652) writes:
yep this still amazes me...*leaves kisses for my partner in crime*


On Monday April 9th, 2007, An Expired Member (15) writes:
very romantic -- great write


On Monday April 9th, 2007, Estrella Destrozada (234) writes:
absotively, posilutely astoundingly real. loved every last drop.


On Sunday April 8th, 2007, Dark_Child (72) writes:
beautifully written...this is a powerfull piece...keep it up.. (Child)


On Sunday April 8th, 2007, alaskanamber (140) writes:
"as apathy is a tower that builds itself to the heavens," what a great line, and to recognize the heavens amongst such obvious pain


On Sunday April 8th, 2007, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:
seperation and aging abound in this nomenclature of faith in the means -- and perhaps even the end.


On Sunday April 8th, 2007, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:
today you've damaged me in the most wonderful of ways


On Sunday April 8th, 2007, torn_beauty (104) writes:
fantastically written my friend. the imagery painted a vivid and dark picture that truly captivates.


On Sunday April 8th, 2007, dying angel (1373) writes:
"you are but a whisper on my lips escaping the grasp of my reaching hand" i haven't been commenting on you lately. but i always read. i've just been having trouble with words. you never disappoint.


On Sunday April 8th, 2007, Mab (1095) writes:
this was very dark and captivating...beauty in every word.I especially loved the 4th stanza ~Meg


On Sunday April 8th, 2007, Armor for your life (11) writes:
...wow...that was truly powerful. I am on my knees before this.


On Sunday April 8th, 2007, Zhaal Nyet Telka (170) writes:
This was purely wonderful, delicious and needed. I love the flow, the words, everything abotu it. ~Angel



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