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"There is No Good before Bye" by Mylissa

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Salty lines of
good-byes whimper
through the grim tunnel
of his ears. As I puddle
lobes forcing him to feel
the wounds of my shallow cries.

Like the irony
of pain and pleasure,
I can’t understand the
{good}before the {bye}.
a shipwreck undiscovered. in
the swell of his turbulent waters.

While my green
and blues turn to black
and whites. Survival of a
heart.beat. aching through padded
walls, playing hide-and-seek with a
strait-jacket instead of a rain-coat.

As he fucked the hurt to
the tip of my nerves- the slaughter
of sensory illusion. so I crawled beneath
the skin of ghosts, hoping to see clear. will
death bring the tender touch of heaven. or bloody
edges. thread with his hands. to burn in this living hell.




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On Tuesday July 17th, 2007, jack paper (215) writes:
Darkly beautiful and fraught with pain.Your words pierce through. I am slain!


On Thursday June 28th, 2007, stormtalk (915) writes:
crawling under skin... another theme of yours... im onto you


On Wednesday March 28th, 2007, Estrella Destrozada (234) writes:
Almost a mystical cry for the riddance of pain. Lovely.


On Tuesday March 27th, 2007, OttOEviL (98) writes:
I can’t understand the {good}before the {bye}. Gah-Damn...Just that alone is fuckin amazing doll.... =]


On Monday March 19th, 2007, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:
This seems like you may have gone a tad intuitive on us with this one. It still means when it means [starkly] but it has a hint of wonder or surprise. Never to have felt lost again were it not like this.


On Saturday March 17th, 2007, LOKI (276) writes:
So true Mylissa.This was a great write.Very intense and heartbreaking as well.Very nice.:)


On Friday March 16th, 2007, Freebird (685) writes:
"And he fucked the hurt to the tip of my nerves" I loved that line. :)


On Friday March 16th, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (151) writes:
And the ending was wonderful.


On Friday March 16th, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (151) writes:
Your absolutely right i`ve never had a GOODbye.You conveyed this message beautifully.


On Friday March 16th, 2007, carlosjackal (1598) writes:
"so I crawled beneath/the skin of ghosts"..that last stanza fucked me sideways and beyond..what a piece, and I still haven't fully absorbed it into my bloodstream. Fuck me, you're so good :)


On Friday March 16th, 2007, Sealed Identity (17) writes:
Very Very nice.. Will you read this to me before I go to sleep at night?


On Friday March 16th, 2007, Mab (1092) writes:
such profound insight...but I can't help but feel there is only purgatory in lieu of happy endings


On Friday March 16th, 2007, blue (1779) writes:
"the slaughter of sensory illusion" this rocks Mum! Love the title; goodbye, two words combined that can't make sense. rawr. ~b


On Friday March 16th, 2007, blue (1779) writes:
well, unless you're talking to crazy peoples. oop.


On Friday March 16th, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:
Nope only crazy elmos heheheh


On Friday March 16th, 2007, blue (1779) writes:
Right! I'll do you for that!! o.O))


On Friday March 16th, 2007, carlosjackal (1598) writes:
You can get 'Shoot Me Up Elmos' They're hilarious.


On Friday March 16th, 2007, blue (1779) writes:
Uncle.


On Friday March 16th, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:
Now that is funny!


On Friday March 16th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1881) writes:
wonderfull job in the art of sinister poetry. I loved the 6th line the most


On Friday March 16th, 2007, raskal (197) writes:
Yes you certainly have a way of dissecting words, meanings and conventional sentencing to mould them into your own delicious and delightful structures. You are a sorceress and I can only choke on the clockwork of your words. (still lovin that)


On Friday March 16th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2383) writes:
sinuous twisting pain executed in lush vibrant language; shivers entertained my spind for the seconds it took to read this such taste an allusions: salty/tears almost wave like...nodily inspections..


On Friday March 16th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2383) writes:
bodily* eevn...this is a poem that embraces many sense many levels, works from molecular angles, where emotions are whorled and whirled in passion deciet and emptiness...you have a way madam, a unique and piercing tone.....un-beeee-lievable mate.


On Friday March 16th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2383) writes:
gah my spelling - a living hell in itself


On Friday March 16th, 2007, blue (1779) writes:
you grew up in a dictionary, and you can't spell.. god damn brits.


On Saturday March 17th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2383) writes:
hahahahaha....shut the fuck up and keep that Wankatron pumping ...you Seseme Street cast off :P


On Saturday March 17th, 2007, blue (1779) writes:
owww! haha, that one hurt my ribs..


On Saturday March 17th, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:
There may be no good before bye but this is some FUNNNNNNNNN stuff...heheh sexchay wankers... hehe



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