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I Made Love With Clothes On

I always made love to him with clothes on.
safety intertwined in the fabric of heat.
a forecast unknown—would it rain
{or} would it snow.

“our” dreams left exposed.

And he began to dip my heart in fondue.
eating away my defenses like
Hannibal Lector- receding only
to chew.

Tasting pain wrapped in the static of beats.
seconds. moments. he plunged so deep.
as I thirst for his words to
tongue tie my wrists.

And his lips to lacerate edges that twist-
forming sexu-ality. taming
spiritu-ality. until I ached
to pray {only to him}.

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On Wednesday June 18th, 2008, DIATRICUS (69) writes:

wonderful stuff -- especially enjoyed "I thirst for his words to tongue tie my wrists."

On Sunday January 20th, 2008, Mab (1028) writes:

I still love coming back to this...

On Thursday October 4th, 2007, bpathos (21) writes:

"Tongue tie my wrists" and "the heart fondue" ... I like these. Wow this list looks like a phone book...

On Thursday June 28th, 2007, stormtalk (909) writes:

not to harp on my last comment, but... coronarily delicious

On Thursday May 17th, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (148) writes:

"receding only to chew"the whole poem was brilliant but I loved this line.

On Monday May 14th, 2007, glasshouse (802) writes:

I had to come back to this. Its beautiful. Very well written. Amazing imagery. An excellent read every time. I cant get tired of it. Beautiful. -Jes

On Saturday March 24th, 2007, Mistress Shadow (356) writes:

You nicely illustrated that sometimes making love with your clothes can be subtle, but sexual too. ~T

On Friday March 2nd, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (693) writes:

Nice! I like the imagery of having your heart dipped in fondue, "tongue tie my wrists" also creates a great mental picture. Ciao, T/S

On Friday March 2nd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1149) writes:

look at you kiddo :) you are evolving every write, finding yourself and ripping yourself open, sewing shut, and ripping open all over again, you are trully finding youre niche

On Thursday March 1st, 2007, Nore (41) writes:

You are totally amazing. Please, keep on writing, the hunger is greater as to read your works!

On Thursday March 1st, 2007, Lynaes (1129) writes:

Oh my god.. this is one of your strongest pieces yet. I absolutely loved the second stanza, like you wouldn't believe.. I wish I could say more, but this is just stunning dearest. It's always a pleasure to read you.

On Tuesday February 27th, 2007, RepulsiveAttraction (109) writes:

I made love in a monkey costume. That aside. I loved this peice, very engaging.

On Tuesday March 13th, 2007, Mylissa (1090) writes:

Monkey costumes NICEEE.

On Tuesday February 27th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:

"tongue tie my wrists. And his lips to lacerate edges that twist-" There is a Poe-esque tinntinnabulation that rings, beats, pulses in this sexual-cum-Hannibal poem. i can feel the fabric of your wordHeat{heatedWords}. Sizzzzz-!

On Monday February 26th, 2007, Sin (1641) writes:

what can i say that hasnt already been said?...this was brilliant..and you are one sexy Libra ;)

On Monday February 26th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2414) writes:

alright down with this; it's such a sexually charged emotional blaster,but yet it maintains a dignified and poetic physique without being overly typical or obvious....and coercerly strikes a unique tone - excellence permeates

On Monday February 26th, 2007, jack paper (212) writes:

this speaks to me in so many ways.. you are such an inspiration

On Monday February 26th, 2007, ShardsofSilence (331) writes:

Ooh la la. What a brilliant write. "Tasting pain wrapped in the static of beats" is my favorite line. Amazing stuff. You get a brownie :D

On Monday February 26th, 2007, glasshouse (802) writes:

*favs* i can say no more. --Jes

On Monday February 26th, 2007, Tangle Box Tales (168) writes:

This is by far the most beautiful thing I have ever read. Blown away on so many levels right now...

On Monday February 26th, 2007, Estrella Destrozada (233) writes:

this goes beyond words of praise or awe...amazing write.

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Freebird (659) writes:

Ohhhh this is good. Way too good

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, blue (1754) writes:

tastes like ice-cream ~b

On Tuesday March 13th, 2007, Mylissa (1090) writes:

mmmmmmm ice cream.

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Nuri (193) writes:

"eating away my defenses like Hannibal Lector- receding only to chew" sinister sweet *grins* oh i love this.

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Mab (1028) writes:

...dip my heart in fondue...tongue tie my wrists...god! you are amazing!

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, carlosjackal (1647) writes:

The more I read this and become indulged the more horny and aroused I become at the gorgeous surrender portrayed in this piece...gorgeous and wretched, yet so raw and sexual..:)

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Tonights Decision (167) writes:

deadly heart pounding poetry, with a slight nightmare shiver runing on my spine.

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, LOKI (266) writes:

so amazing.You have a way with your words that I cant explain.I see the writers block went away.Beautiful write Mylissa.Muaahz

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, dying angel (1344) writes:

"Tasting pain wrapped in the static of beats." the last stanza really made me hold my breath. this was so painfully beautiful. "until I ached to pray {only to him}." god that line will stay with me for a while

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1162) writes:

i really loved the opening stanza..i've read this a few times now, and i don't really know what to say. this was strangely beautiful, like a painting with bloody edges, yet it can never erase the lonely scenes..wonderful job.

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2414) writes:

as ever a quality you retain all of your own madam....an engaging poem, sorry I don't possess a better mood to post a better comment...perhaps another day I'll be able too

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Tania (310) writes:

This is intense stuff.. lots of lines stood out..'safety intertwined in the fabric of heat' 'tasting pain wrapped in static beats' again.. truly wonderful.

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Gold Dust Woman (186) writes:

I really loved "And he began to dip my heart in fondue. eating away my defenses like Hannibal Lector" because it stood out and made sense to me. this was really good to read.

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, heartdripsblack (765) writes:

wow, this has to be one of my favorites of yours. nicely done. ~ red.

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