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"To Clutch Fireflies.You're Inside Me" by Mylissa

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I wrote poems across the silver of
your tombstone. knowing your
bones were beneath my knees. trying to
recreate- how I lov{ed} thee- with the initials of {R.I.P}.

And I tasted dead rose petals
to feel you digest inside me.
Quilting love letters across
the length of your grave.

praying to God ‘please’ let it rain.
dissolve the sound of tears to the soil of
this earth, and sing sweet lullabies
inside the demise of skeletal ears.

And I struggled for some sort of sign.
clutching fireflies under the moon for some
sense of light. as the wind caught my cries in the palm
of his hands. I searched for an opening of mud and sand.

I was digging as if living
through a dream, reality was lost.
or so it seems. and I will devour the
ground just to set you free.

Because when you died -
you somehow forgot to take me.





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On Friday July 27th, 2007, An Expired Member (12) writes:
exquisite. pretty imagery; i liked the third stanza the best. it has such a soft melancholy touch that i love. keep writing x


On Tuesday July 24th, 2007, jack paper (215) writes:
beautiful and crushing, brings tears to my eyes


On Thursday June 28th, 2007, stormtalk (915) writes:
cohesively delicious


On Friday June 22nd, 2007, boughtwithblood (297) writes:
''i searched... mud and sand'' This was wrenching. the title is packed with images as well.


On Monday May 14th, 2007, Mistress Shadow (335) writes:
I have nothing intelligent to say other then I loved this. ~T


On Thursday March 15th, 2007, blue (1784) writes:
~b yup.


On Saturday February 24th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
I'm awaiting the next installment


On Friday February 23rd, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
wow you really struck a cord with this, tremendous support for this poem, one I found myself coming back too, time and time again, like personal memories, like gravestone visits....cuts so deep mate, truly great


On Friday February 23rd, 2007, Dark Nymph (76) writes:
You write with such emotion as well (Probably way before I ever did)! Very touching.


On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, Armor for your life (11) writes:
"I will devour the ground just to set you free" That is amazing, this poem hits all the right places. Excellent job


On Tuesday February 20th, 2007, ThirdAuthor (19) writes:
Your Profile says "Don't fall in love with me, because I leap". ..You must do alot of leaping.


On Monday February 19th, 2007, An Expired Member (31) writes:
intense, so sadening. Love your style


On Monday February 19th, 2007, Brahman Sol (34) writes:
a mournful, beautiful write. clutched the fireflies, held them in sorrowed hands & released them to the night sky.


On Monday February 19th, 2007, Lynaes (1148) writes:
Bethany is right, everytime I read you.. I am increasingly stunned. You're blossoming beautifully as a writer. "Quilting love letters across the length of your grave." gorgeous line. I love this.


On Sunday February 18th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1164) writes:
your poems keep on getting more and more beautiful..


On Saturday February 17th, 2007, Tonights Decision (173) writes:
"to clutch Fireflies."..... how well you capture these feelings, frome start to finish. truly felt..


On Saturday February 17th, 2007, carlosjackal (1614) writes:
"you somehow forgot to take me." The killer of all killer last lines and the end to a stunner of a poem, beautiful flow, beautiful language...your development since joining DP has been astounding :)


On Saturday February 17th, 2007, blue (1784) writes:
~b


On Friday February 16th, 2007, Endifference (275) writes:
just...damn. I had to take a step back at that last line. The poem is a play in itself. I can't find the words...awesome. Favorites. -END


On Friday February 16th, 2007, Freebird (685) writes:
Oh God this was devastating, yet so beautiful. It melted my heart.


On Friday February 16th, 2007, dying angel (1373) writes:
this literally made me break down. it crushed me into tiny pieces and i'm sure i felt the sadness seep from your smile into my heart. *hugs*


On Friday February 16th, 2007, heartdripsblack (769) writes:
this was beautiful. sad. full of heart ache. nicely done. ~ red.


On Friday February 16th, 2007, Michelle Xiao (518) writes:
spectacular tribute.


On Friday February 16th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
came back to saok this up once more...such eloquent sadness crafted, I find myself deep within its eulogy reverberations....what a post


On Friday February 16th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
soak* of course...hula hoop?


On Friday February 16th, 2007, soul dancer (180) writes:
So sad, another beautiful write.


On Friday February 16th, 2007, zanewill (117) writes:
i can totaly relate...>>>>>>> write on!!


On Friday February 16th, 2007, Sin (1652) writes:
...ive felt this, done this...i have no words to comment *leaves tears as tributes*


On Friday February 16th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
seriously powerful; a solemn dive back into a pained memory, from start to finish this poem was gripping and thoughtful and indeed extremely memorable....an amazing piece Mylissa - Col.


On Friday February 16th, 2007, verablue (164) writes:
wow....i'm speachless. that ending was just perfect.


On Friday February 16th, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (696) writes:
"the wind caught my cries in the palm of his hands", I know that feeling...that line describes it so well... Ciao, T/S


On Friday February 16th, 2007, blue (1784) writes:
If this was indeed written from experience, then I am sorry to share this ever present pain with you. Blessed be. ~b


On Friday February 16th, 2007, LOKI (276) writes:
This is tragically beautiful Mylissa.I almost wanted to cry after reading it.You are an amazing soul.Muaahhz


On Friday February 16th, 2007, Tania (318) writes:
Beautiful write mylissa.. ~ i was just about to comment on your last then it vanished? oh well ~ x


On Friday February 16th, 2007, Estrella Destrozada (234) writes:
Oh, longing for a lost love. This was purely beautiful.



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