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Eat Elegance Alive

Skip a rock under my skin, layer-cake.
A slippery slope of
penetrating reins that
romance me clothe-less, breath-less.

A timeless piece of your poetry, surrounding me.
stinging the wounds of a tree
like a bumble bee. pollinate me.

Line my lips with pebbles, a ruby forest.
Focus on a muse. Make love to me,
enlisting liquid locus to bloom.

Scavenge through a denim’s demise,
pick through the orchard’s floor.
Prick me powerless.

A precious promise, a desire,
drowning, begging for more.
Under moonlit light, there must be a decision.
Tonight’s decision.

He will..we will…eat elegance alive.

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On Tuesday July 24th, 2007, jack paper (213) writes:

how did i miss this?... a heartfelt and intriging homage...simply beautiful

On Friday July 20th, 2007, NikesRain (1504) writes:

my goodness that was.... damn.. just damn

On Thursday June 28th, 2007, stormtalk (911) writes:

please sir, may i have summore?

On Tuesday March 13th, 2007, Mab (1065) writes:

your words are so enchanting...you always leave me spell-binded

On Sunday March 11th, 2007, blue (1764) writes:

So.. you're gonna eat his sex?

On Sunday March 11th, 2007, Mylissa (1117) writes:

shushhhimmm buttercups.

On Monday March 12th, 2007, blue (1764) writes:

i knew it

On Monday March 12th, 2007, blue (1764) writes:

hey! you got my 1900th comment. you owe me ice cream lady.

On Monday March 12th, 2007, Mylissa (1117) writes:

I'll give a scoop...of something sexchay. crazy elmozzz

On Monday March 12th, 2007, blue (1764) writes:

damn womens

On Monday March 12th, 2007, Mylissa (1117) writes:

elmo, elmo...crazzzzzzzzy elmo.

On Monday March 12th, 2007, blue (1764) writes:

hey! you're not allowed to call me that o.O))

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, TheDismantled (21) writes:

sweet swallow your heart and keep it for my own

On Friday February 16th, 2007, Endifference (272) writes:

Drugs I say! Sheer intoxication. I bow to you, madame. -END

On Thursday February 1st, 2007, AniDayz (1289) writes:

this is *so* taste.full...simply sparkling with a tempting beauty...spoken with such an innovative and dancing tongue...ahhh...goodness...this is magickal.

On Tuesday January 30th, 2007, Brahman Sol (34) writes:

Sensual & a beautiful flow of words. Amazingly written!

On Tuesday January 30th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:

"Line my lips with pebbles, a ruby forest." Such sexual wounds of poetry: "clothe-less, breath-less." Gor-geous. This is the kind of poem that drips wordsweat & orchard colours down the steaming throat of desire. A beauty.

On Monday January 29th, 2007, Instant Insanity (768) writes:

Brilliant. This has an excellent flow and metaphorical use. This is truly one of my favorite pieces of yours ][ ][

On Monday January 29th, 2007, Estrella Destrozada (233) writes:

Exquisitely portrayed. You are stunningly beautiful, and your poetry matches. Instantly one of my favorites, you and this piece.

On Monday January 29th, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (689) writes:

"Skip a rock under my skin" - fantastic mental picture! I like this piece very much. Ciao, T/S

On Sunday January 28th, 2007, carlosjackal (1614) writes:

This held such a cryptic beauty, desire and nature intertwined into magnificent mystery. Fantastic write.

On Saturday January 27th, 2007, Zen (643) writes:

you kinda remind me of jon.

On Friday January 26th, 2007, heartdripsblack (768) writes:

your poems just keep getting more wonderful to read. nicely done again. ~ red.

On Friday January 26th, 2007, Tonights Decision (169) writes:

I cannot fully express, what this does to me.. like catching the remembrance of solitary nights. A ache.. that drifts trough lush gardens. ..truly felt..

On Friday January 26th, 2007, LOKI (276) writes:

i liked this alot.The passion of your words was beautiful.It mesmerized me.

On Friday January 26th, 2007, Sin (1639) writes:

this was absolutely wonderful! and that last line what a killer..~kristy

On Friday January 26th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2382) writes:

a surreal danc with some original ideas: "line my lips with pebbles, a ruby forest" mde the landscape between human desire and nature seem so close; a nexus developed.....very good

On Saturday February 24th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2382) writes:

:) wankerdumdooboodle....aboogadalooga.... DANCE!!!!

On Saturday February 24th, 2007, Mylissa (1117) writes:

dancing like a promdoodlediooodood

On Friday January 26th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1166) writes:

yay! you posted again! other then that, seductive and blood boiling, totall kudos

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