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7th 8th and by 9th avenue I knew
I had found you. I paid a whore. Not
to see the gloss of her lips, or the sway of
her hips, no I never will love a woman.

I just wanted her to pretend.

Pretend to be the one who hurt me so, a horrid heartbreak.
Swearing to the stars, a sad soul of a creature
torn, I despised her and swore against the person she represents.

I would never touch a whore’s mouth,
but I did puff a cigarette that was engraved with her lipstick.
I needed to taste, baste in the bitch who was encased with you.

It happened without warning, pure irritation as I couldn’t
see the separation that on a back ally street was so clear.
As it fell, the sadness of a lonely tear.

It brought a sympathetic nature to her smile,
this pathetic poetic display made a worn whore care.
And I knew I loved her, as I once loved you.

Then she spoke a single sentence…
“Your hour is up”, as the door behind her shut.

And I was broken again over a slut and a few bucks.






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On Monday August 13th, 2007, Please Press Reset (163) writes:
never ceasing to amazing, and still absolutely original


On Tuesday July 24th, 2007, jack paper (215) writes:
this still amazes and impresses... a lonely tear... and i knew i loved her.. draws me in and by the end i feel myself broken... egads!


On Thursday June 28th, 2007, stormtalk (915) writes:
rough stuff, smoothly written


On Saturday June 16th, 2007, raskal (197) writes:
you know i love this story - i've read it a few times now and it always amuses me.


On Monday April 2nd, 2007, blue (1778) writes:
I don't get it. o.O))


On Saturday February 24th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2382) writes:
very sombre; how do you carousel such rhythm in sych subject matters....so beguiling when it shouldn't be...wow!!


On Saturday February 17th, 2007, An Expired Member (34) writes:
wow... this is... awesome. and so creative


On Saturday February 17th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (409) writes:
Beautifully crafted and fantastic


On Friday February 16th, 2007, Endifference (275) writes:
"Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned." If this is true, you've got tact few can equal - like a sniper. Badass write, love it. Fucking ace, to be blunt. -END


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, Anabel Lee (3) writes:
Then she spoke a single sentence… “Your hour is up”, as the door behind her shut. And I was broken again over a slut and a few bucks. **This was amazing. The best lines I have ever read!!


On Wednesday January 24th, 2007, The Fool (1048) writes:
This was fucking fanstastic*is in awe*


On Friday January 5th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1119) writes:
"I would never touch a whore’s mouth, but I did puff a cigarette that was engraved with her lipstick." This is a fantastic pocket of sub-reality: I love the prose/poetic feel, sheen & worn like a horrid smile; & the rhythm is dead on.“Your hour is up.”


On Friday January 5th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1119) writes:
... perfect sadness. I can taste the ashes of your heart; I can taste this poem. Well done.


On Monday January 1st, 2007, Tonights Decision (173) writes:
crushing..


On Wednesday December 27th, 2006, LOKI (276) writes:
yes jawdropping is a good word for it.It left me in awe.Great write


On Wednesday December 27th, 2006, heartdripsblack (769) writes:
this is jaw dropping. nicely done ~ red.


On Wednesday December 27th, 2006, carlosjackal (1608) writes:
Wow. It's time I did what I need to do.


On Wednesday December 27th, 2006, jack paper (215) writes:
nicely illustrated, great finish, good write


On Tuesday December 26th, 2006, Six-Out (1831) writes:
wow. I'm crushed by these words. You're utterly...beautiful.


On Tuesday December 26th, 2006, dying angel (1374) writes:
"I would never touch a whore’s mouth, but I did puff a cigarette that was engraved with her lipstick."...*instant fave* that ending was so bitter. this whole write was bitterly tragic.



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