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Paris created her like a ceiling for
Michelangelo’s vision of vast art.
She is perfectly proportioned, as her smile
pierced arrows penetrating the meanest of hearts,
I love her.

When words cascade through the crescent
of a pen, she is brilliant, beautiful. A
gorgeous, factious soul. A creature of
creation without the worlds lasting limitations,
a delicate girl.

She speaks to angels, flies with fairies
and sores through only the bluest of skies.
Unconditional love can’t define her and
I, as she knows I would start back at zero just
to create such perfection again.

Madyson, my daughter…I love you.





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On Sunday July 8th, 2007, Err0r (586) writes:
This is an amazing piece and she is such a pretty young girl!!! =) How adorable.


On Wednesday July 4th, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:
aww thanks everyone, this is my best work.


On Wednesday July 4th, 2007, glasshouse (812) writes:
Beautiful. Both the child and the tribute. Clearly loving. I have chills. Well done. --Jes


On Wednesday July 4th, 2007, ReddropX (46) writes:
I love this. Your writing is so eloquent. And your muse is adorable.


On Thursday June 28th, 2007, stormtalk (915) writes:
in a few years youll be a liar for saying youd never love a woman... mwahahah, fate always has home team advantage


On Thursday March 22nd, 2007, Mab (1092) writes:
she's got her mamma's good looks and I'm sure she's got your beautiful mind as well!


On Saturday February 24th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2383) writes:
ahhhhhh......is she as cheeky as mum; I'll bet - you guys are gonna share some great times, if she grows up to be like mum - she will be awesome and talented and respected. :)


On Tuesday February 20th, 2007, ThirdAuthor (19) writes:
Your creative mind is a phantasmagoria of vivid imagery, interwoven passion; layering apon layers of simplistic beauty; complicated and yet so salacious. Your daughter however is a Goddess. How do you do it? I'm sure the angels sing when she smiles:) I k


On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Lynaes (1148) writes:
She's so beautiful. Tania's right, she is the image of you. You both have the same cute nose. :) Thank you for sharing, I hope I have a daughter when I have kids.


On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Tania (318) writes:
Your daughter is a mirror image of you ~ Beautiful ~


On Saturday December 23rd, 2006, jack paper (215) writes:
touching, reminds me of my daughter when she would "speak to angels" enjoy they grow all too quickly


On Wednesday December 20th, 2006, Alanarchy (1608) writes:
"A creature of creation without the worlds lasting limitations." Just beautiful. :D She looks just like you.


On Wednesday December 20th, 2006, Bella Butchery (1171) writes:
its writes like this that make me happy, and fuels my anticipation of one day being a good father. treat her like a rare jewel, because she seems to be one


On Tuesday December 19th, 2006, LOKI (276) writes:
Nothing like a mothers love.And you describe it real well.A masterpiece.You have an angel indeed :)


On Monday December 18th, 2006, heartdripsblack (769) writes:
this was truely an epic masterpiec both the pic and poem ! red


On Monday December 18th, 2006, veingo (552) writes:
This couldn't be more beautiful. :)- ^V^


On Monday December 18th, 2006, Six-Out (1832) writes:
aw. she's adorable. and great poem too. :)


On Monday December 18th, 2006, verablue (164) writes:
aw, what a wonderful tribute! and she's just darling!!


On Monday December 18th, 2006, ShardsofSilence (347) writes:
She is absolutely gorgeous :)


On Monday December 18th, 2006, blue (1779) writes:
I don't know why, but I want to poke her in the belly and call her a pumpkin! So adorable. You did good Mommy. =) ~b


On Monday December 18th, 2006, dying angel (1374) writes:
OMG! i wanna bite her. she's sooooo gorgeous like her mommy! her eyes are so angelic.


On Monday December 18th, 2006, Ainsof (1729) writes:
yeah, see, you wanna teach her to bite... tsk, tsk *shakes head*


On Monday December 18th, 2006, dying angel (1374) writes:
ahem. actually, yes, so she can defend herself against dirty minds. =)


On Monday December 18th, 2006, Mylissa (1130) writes:
lol I like that idea, defend, defend...;)


On Monday December 18th, 2006, Ainsof (1729) writes:
Awwwwwww!! adorable! she is such a lil cutie, my... could there be a better reason to live? Heart-melting!!


On Monday December 18th, 2006, Arianna (193) writes:
and she's so beautiful! Thank you for sharing!


On Monday December 18th, 2006, carlosjackal (1598) writes:
An excellent, heart-bursting tribute to your gorgeous daughter.


On Monday December 18th, 2006, Kin Hebi (110) writes:
This was beautiful. Very pretty little girl you have. ~Bry~



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