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Leave A Note On Her

So you spoke with the whisper of white willows,
as I stood with the ache of an April’s moon.
Moments of movements surround my thoughts
watching you with her, her with you.

I begged under a bird’s breath for a minimal measure of peace,
though pressing of lips upon her velvet skin
Left me soundless, speechless, yes unable to speak.

Leave a note on her.

Pronounce with profound periods the truth behind
your eyes. Engrave across her hypnotic hips the
reason of our release. I will scramble letters
violating words, screaming them across blistered blue skies.

Truth towers over the racket of your soul with the
tiniest of touches you stamp upon her tones. Killing me
would be easier then these theatrical performances of a
love once mine. I will read the note on her, no longer will
I be blind.

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On Sunday August 19th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2407) writes:

"watching you with her, her with you" so elegantly cool and sombre.....still my fav of yours, this poem is a paragon...brillaint to read over and over

On Wednesday July 11th, 2007, Unforgotten (155) writes:

leave a note on her indeed. I love it

On Thursday June 28th, 2007, stormtalk (908) writes:

this is one of your best, lines 5, 8, and the whole fourth stanza are wonderful

On Friday June 22nd, 2007, boughtwithblood (296) writes:

very cool, especially the image of blistered blue skies. nice job!

On Wednesday April 4th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2407) writes:

I'm still amazed to come here and find I was the last one to comment on this....it is fuckin beathtaking so brilliant from start to finish

On Saturday February 24th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2407) writes:

I want to remember that if I ever upgrade I need to come here and bookmark this poem....this poem deserves to bookmarked by every single DP memeber..it is simply astonishing; absolutely astonshing...Jesus

On Saturday February 24th, 2007, DiscordiaDarling (32) writes:

Wow, this was beyond breath taking.

On Saturday February 24th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2407) writes:

I absolutely agree...I am rarely speechless, but this was flawless...I am amazed

On Thursday February 8th, 2007, Anabel Lee (3) writes:

Been there, very painful. Seems as though nothing would ever stop the hurt. Very painfully written, yet beautiful at the same time. I loved it!

On Tuesday December 26th, 2006, jack paper (207) writes:

violating words, screaming... evocative, i am in awe.

On Thursday December 14th, 2006, AniDayz (1267) writes:

the creative imagery and astonishing intensity of your words breaks me, pulls me,

On Thursday December 14th, 2006, AniDayz (1267) writes:

twists through an .ache.... pieces me back again...formulates a breath within me that i cannot articulate...this piece leaves me in lingering, wordless attraction...im drawn INto it...and unable to express myself...

On Friday December 8th, 2006, Tonights Decision (166) writes:

The first stanza breaks me...like velvet thorns.. This was beautiful..

On Thursday December 7th, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1103) writes:

"...screaming them across blistered blue skies." The depth & passion, the heat & beauty of this poem is a movement of moments in pure poetry, like "velvet skin." Well done.

On Tuesday December 5th, 2006, dying angel (1328) writes:

"I will scramble letters violating words, screaming them across blistered blue skies." your wording is always so powerful. its hard not to feel anything.

On Tuesday December 5th, 2006, Kin Hebi (95) writes:

This was very very beautiful. I felt like I was witnessing it first hand. Good job. ~Bry~

On Tuesday December 5th, 2006, LOKI (265) writes:

This was a beatiful diplay of your emotions and hurt.Nice write Mylissa.I loved it. :D LOKI

On Tuesday December 5th, 2006, Alanarchy (1691) writes:

Wow. Crushing, is all I can really say. Write on.

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