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Erode ME!

I HATE you....I think you are disposable, you are a disease...
yes a disease....
I think I will call you AIDS,
that is right that is how much I hate you...
FUCK me, infect me with your HIV,
do you realize that will kill me?
That is what you want to kill me, and fuck me,
can you imagaine that?
You, and I, I and you....without both it is limited,
limited to what you can do, I can do....
Do???? Do me, now, please,
I am begging,
give me your cum to hold in my hands to wash with.
Wash with,
I can feel your words they scorn me like a brillow pad...
are you still washing me?
Wash me with your cum,
with a brillow pad...
till I bleed the vanity out of my system...
You know I am vain, I have to be...
I am writing to you, acting like you are writing to me...
FUCK YOU.

I don't care if you are, if you are writing to another,
I am writing to you, you and only you.....
I still fucken hate you, like the beautiful disease you are.
Elegently erroding my circulatory system.
Your passion has incased my body,
my body is aching to be treated in your hospital...
are you my Dr.?
Fuck me then, use me then, is that vulgar enough for you...
I am a princess damn-it...I can't talk like this.
Others can't know this, I am a princess,
I am what everyone is supposed to be...
Others can't know, it will ruin me....like you have.

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On Sunday January 13th, 2008, xserratedsoulx (276) writes:

so raw. love it.

On Thursday August 30th, 2007, An Expired Member (17) writes:

RAW?? VERY MUCH SO! I can relate to the feelings of being enticed and drawn to that which I disdain and hate the most.

On Thursday July 12th, 2007, Err0r (571) writes:

Your words are simply amazing. This is so real. The emotions everything is raw. I like that. This is a great write.

On Thursday June 28th, 2007, stormtalk (908) writes:

mm... whos doing the supposing?

On Friday November 16th, 2007, carlosjackal (1719) writes:

You are :P

On Friday April 27th, 2007, Quackers (30) writes:

This princess needs to be chained to a wall until she is happy again ;) Loved this. I felt as if you were talking to me.

On Sunday April 8th, 2007, En Sabah Nur (67) writes:

OUCH!!! this was very powerfull and raw...i felt like i was on a rollercoaster ride...beautiful.. (Child)

On Friday March 16th, 2007, carlosjackal (1719) writes:

Raw, bleeding passion, lust and fucked up-ness turned to 10. Brilliant!

On Friday March 9th, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (145) writes:

This was a wonderful piece of chaos and anger.I sometimes want to scream things like this even though no one thinks i would even think it.

On Saturday February 24th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2407) writes:

this is discourse and mayhem and it fights with the sterotype of maybe what men perceive women as...the vulgar outbursts seem to indicate such colossal struggles of self and self worth - rapid and rancous; impressive and strong :)

On Monday December 18th, 2006, elisa (2018) writes:

'...I am a princess damn-it...'...... shit..... rich in fantasy.

On Monday December 18th, 2006, LOKI (265) writes:

Damn this was intense.A great write.And you are a princess no matter what.:)

On Tuesday November 21st, 2006, Instant Insanity (745) writes:

Oh I Love It. Its So Deceitful. I think we all have this feeling toward somebody throughout our life wheather it is the 9/11 terrorist or the raping step father. either way I belive everybody can relate to this ][ ][

On Monday November 13th, 2006, edenscancer (46) writes:

:O another great write.

On Wednesday February 15th, 2006, An Expired Member (7) writes:

I like the aggression in both sets of writings so far. And how you're not afraid to use sexual theme in them.

On Tuesday October 11th, 2005, capt_funguy (993) writes:

fuckin fabulous ... " i am a princess damn - it " ... again , completely convinced ... urgent insanity ... a joy to read ... funguy

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