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He Flatters Me From Heavens Spine

His lips
remind me of the plump
bodies of two butterflies making love,

natures expression
of hedonistic desire.

And his scent
smolders, disavowing pheromones
beneath the quivering skin of my belly ring.

I can taste the
torture of his moon-draped pupils,
it is utterly the manifestation of my least purest dreams.

Reflections of my salvation mingle between
the plates of our tonsils, versus of penetration
bellow from the flickering roots of vulgar ink blots.

He is inside me,
from a distance. drilling
oblique flattery from heavens spine…

and he is more edible to my thoughts
then the delicious murder of an angels wings.

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On Sunday October 7th, 2007, Dysphoria (169) writes:

This is so stunningly beautiful, Your words are absolutely breathtaking..

On Saturday September 15th, 2007, Err0r (586) writes:

'least purest dreams' haha nice. Desire/teasing until the very end where you commit your words to such thoughtful ways of expression. Very well done.

On Monday August 27th, 2007, jack paper (215) writes:

you start with butterflies and end with angels and in between... desire, smoldering, quivering, mingling, penetration, flickering, drilling... sexy but somehow filled with wanting

On Monday August 27th, 2007, Mab (1095) writes:

you are a smoldering ember on my tongue...such passion!I love this.

On Monday August 27th, 2007, unspeakable truth (154) writes:

You always leave me breathless at the end, swimming in an array of thoughts and longing for more...

On Thursday August 23rd, 2007, Tania (318) writes:

gorgeous.. oozes with desire.. perfect.

On Thursday August 23rd, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1119) writes:

"bellow from the flickering roots of vulgar ink blots" Sexually, sensuous & superlatively sinful. Your desire well expressed from the textured penetrations of a romantic poet.

On Wednesday August 22nd, 2007, Winterwords (20) writes:

reads like the love child of Trent Reznor and Anis Nin...wonderfully wicked

On Monday August 20th, 2007, NikesRain (1512) writes:

rich and darkly dreamlike, moving and advancing like prey being stalked and overcome with a wicked grin...

On Monday August 20th, 2007, blue (1780) writes:

sexy

On Monday August 20th, 2007, An Expired Member (20) writes:

Very Intense and moving. I can almost feel the heat in your desire. I look forward to reading more. FeyFalen

On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2380) writes:

yeah it's true you have a haunted poise about your works....it's easy to say they are hot and steamy lala...what I notice is the constructive layer of words and inner rhythms that heighten the euphoric tone of the poem's "moment"

On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2380) writes:

so therefore the words themselves can offer themselves as seductive suggestions just by placed pronounciation alone...like french syllable stresses or any language that alters ....the words come alive and form a whole

On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2380) writes:

and so reach out further than the average can ever maintain......in a nutshell, sensational....just truly that.....so excellent

On Sunday August 19th, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:

wankersnitzle!

On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Winter Born (168) writes:

Reflections of my salvation...I do believe you just started my next poem... great write.

On Friday August 17th, 2007, Narcissa (724) writes:

I love reading your stuff - it's so inspirational

On Friday August 17th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1171) writes:

makes me want to dream the sweetest of dreams.

On Friday August 17th, 2007, Alanarchy (1609) writes:

CJ nailed it. No one does desire like you do. Classic Myl. Hot and steamy like.

On Friday August 17th, 2007, carlosjackal (1608) writes:

Dirty sweet and so unique. This could only have been written by you, Mylissa. Just fabulous :)

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