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Stained Lips Speak Silence

I thread his lips…

to crawl under the
skin of his ghostly consent.
Branding useless the words of tomorrow.

Now this moment is forever.

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On Sunday January 13th, 2008, xserratedsoulx (284) writes:

oooh...that last line is absolutely chilling, in the best way imaginable.

On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, unspeakable truth (154) writes:

Lustful, with traces of pain, the good kind...oops ;) A few lines, this vivid imagination is set of fire. Beautifully done.

On Friday July 6th, 2007, Tonights Decision (173) writes:

this feeling.. of being lost in the moment, is so truly felt..

On Tuesday July 3rd, 2007, The Spiral Downward (409) writes:

It's Amazing How You Speak Volumes With So Little Words! Splendid Use Of Metaphors And Imagery!!! Great Write! \Billy/

On Monday July 2nd, 2007, Estrella Destrozada (234) writes:

I can't even describe the feelings I get from reading your words.

On Thursday June 28th, 2007, stormtalk (915) writes:

you phantasmal bedbug

On Thursday June 28th, 2007, Tania (318) writes:

(Thank you) and reading works like this has been missed :) deep and sensual undertones.. like tainted whispers.love it.

On Thursday June 28th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:

cool biznizz....sounds painful though, threaded lips....hmmm; echoing Carl here because I'm too lazy to otherwise....haunting, like a spectre's thought pursed to life....ayyarrghhh!!

On Thursday June 28th, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:

WHERE have you been! We have missed you, did the wonkavator crash or what?? Anyways, we MISSED you miserably.

On Thursday June 28th, 2007, blue (1784) writes:

god damn brits!

On Sunday July 1st, 2007, carlosjackal (1614) writes:

Tally-Ho, what-what! I say, ol' chap, desist with your "god damn"!

On Tuesday July 3rd, 2007, blue (1784) writes:

okok. bugger all!

On Thursday June 28th, 2007, carlosjackal (1614) writes:

Mmmmm...erotic hauntings. Heavy weight poetics carefully weighted in minimal choice words. =) -Carl

On Wednesday June 27th, 2007, Alanarchy (1615) writes:

Couldn't help but sense the erotic undertones here. Like sewing lips shut, when words might just get in the way of a good time. "Now this moment is forever." Write the hell on.

On Wednesday June 27th, 2007, glasshouse (812) writes:

Short but powerful. I love writes like these. Your words have obviously been chosen carefully. And well. I'll return to this more than once, i'm sure. Well done. --Jes

On Wednesday June 27th, 2007, blue (1784) writes:

divine momentary reason. hai. ~b

On Wednesday June 27th, 2007, GreyDividing (205) writes:

Well it sure doesn't always take much to make a point. This was like one of those fleeting little moments of enlightenment. Very Nice.

On Wednesday June 27th, 2007, Mab (1095) writes:

the title reeled me in...short and poignant.Loved it!

On Wednesday June 27th, 2007, OttOEviL (98) writes:

o_O Crazy stalker killer you!!!! lol... jk...........josh

On Wednesday June 27th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1119) writes:

"Branding useless the words of tomorrow." A provocative & profound line. "Stained Lips..." is almost horrifying, & perhaps if I read it under a nombre luna llena (i hope my Spanish is accurate here): if I think on it, taste it deeper, perchance it'll...

On Wednesday June 27th, 2007, Err0r (586) writes:

The littlest words said, mean the most in so many cases. This is one of them. Beautifully Scripted hun.

On Wednesday June 27th, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1093) writes:

Short on words, but heavy on meaning and beauty. I love the way the images play across my eyelashes, like forbidden kisses stolen in the darkness of midnight hours. Excellent. ~*Beth*~

On Wednesday June 27th, 2007, torn_beauty (104) writes:

intense. and short.

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