Stained Lips Speak Silence

I thread his lips…

to crawl under the
skin of his ghostly consent.
Branding useless the words of tomorrow.

Now this moment is forever.

More comments:

• On Sunday, January 13, 2008, xserratedsoulx (250) wrote:
  
  oooh...that last line is absolutely chilling, in the best way imaginable.
  
  
• On Tuesday, July 10, 2007, unspeakable truth (121) wrote:
  
  Lustful, with traces of pain, the good kind...oops ;) A few lines, this vivid imagination is set of fire. Beautifully done.
  
  
• On Friday, July 6, 2007, Tonights Decision (142) wrote:
  
  this feeling.. of being lost in the moment, is so truly felt..
  
  
• On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, Spiral Downward (412) wrote:
  
  It's Amazing How You Speak Volumes With So Little Words! Splendid Use Of Metaphors And Imagery!!! Great Write! \Billy/
  
  
• On Monday, July 2, 2007, Estrella Destrozada (202) wrote:
  
  I can't even describe the feelings I get from reading your words.
  
  
• On Thursday, June 28, 2007, stormtalk (821) wrote:
  
  you phantasmal bedbug
  
  
• On Thursday, June 28, 2007, Tania (235) wrote:
  
  (Thank you) and reading works like this has been missed :) deep and sensual undertones.. like tainted whispers.love it.
  
  
• On Thursday, June 28, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2210) wrote:
  
  cool biznizz....sounds painful though, threaded lips....hmmm; echoing Carl here because I'm too lazy to otherwise....haunting, like a spectre's thought pursed to life....ayyarrghhh!!
  
  
• On Thursday, June 28, 2007, Mylissa (1128) wrote:
  
  WHERE have you been! We have missed you, did the wonkavator crash or what?? Anyways, we MISSED you miserably.
  
  
• On Thursday, June 28, 2007, blue (1607) wrote:
  
  god damn brits!
  
  
• On Sunday, July 1, 2007, carlosjackal (1804) wrote:
  
  Tally-Ho, what-what! I say, ol' chap, desist with your "god damn"!
  
  
• On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, blue (1607) wrote:
  
  okok. bugger all!
  
  
• On Thursday, June 28, 2007, carlosjackal (1804) wrote:
  
  Mmmmm...erotic hauntings. Heavy weight poetics carefully weighted in minimal choice words. =) -Carl
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 27, 2007, Alanarchy (1487) wrote:
  
  Couldn't help but sense the erotic undertones here. Like sewing lips shut, when words might just get in the way of a good time. "Now this moment is forever." Write the hell on.
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 27, 2007, glasshouse (702) wrote:
  
  Short but powerful. I love writes like these. Your words have obviously been chosen carefully. And well. I'll return to this more than once, i'm sure. Well done. --Jes
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 27, 2007, blue (1607) wrote:
  
  divine momentary reason. hai. ~b
  
  
• A former member wrote: Well it sure doesn't always take much to make a point. This was like one of those fleeting little moments of enlightenment. Very Nice.
  
  
• On Wednesday, June 27, 2007, Mab (1196) wrote:
  
  the title reeled me in...short and poignant.Loved it!
  
  
• A former member wrote: o_O Crazy stalker killer you!!!! lol... jk...........josh