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"The Wise Rose" by fushigi no kaosu

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Black on black, unseen, unknown,
Growing in a garden lone,
Seeking out a crypt of bone
And silent in its seeming.

A simple rose it saw below,
A beauty it had yet to know,
Reminding of a land of snow
With blood upon it gleaming.

And seized by jealous apathy,
The blackness lingered by the tree
To watch the rose so silently—
It dreamed forlorn and bitter.

The rose, it told of many things;
The symbol of what loving brings,
A flower to be given wings
Or borne upon a litter.

The blackness, held in wonder’s thrall,
Implored the rose to tell it all,
But no more answered blackness’ call
The rose, in wisdom blooming.

In vain the darkness pled and cried
Only to find the rose had died—
Nor may a rose forever bide,
But fade into the glooming.

And so the darkness goes it way,
Bereft of reason there to stay,
And nowhere to its burdens lay,
Nor ever solace finding.

The black-on-black forever flows,
A soul that only torment knows.
It seeks the wisdom of the rose
To loose it from its binding.


 i wrote this one down in the middle of the night when i awoke from a dream, this poem is based on that dream.



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On Monday August 29th, 2005, Doc (186) writes:
EXCELLENT. It flows beautifully. Very well done, Its rare to read a poem like thisd much anymore


On Sunday August 7th, 2005, SilentStalker (1320) writes:
...this is actually spectacular; I was trying to find someone who could put words together so effortlessly and make it too easy to read...if this is really yours, I commend your writing skill...


On Sunday August 7th, 2005, purr_verse (1435) writes:
Marvellously done. Compelling story AND perfect metre, in a challenging format so easily messed up. I love your work so far; manywelcomes to dp. :)


On Sunday August 7th, 2005, Jay Jii (334) writes:
Beautifully spun. Impressive rhyme scheme. I'll have to keep an eye on your works as you write them.


On Sunday August 7th, 2005, indefined (713) writes:
i think that's pretty damn awesome. i haven't read many poems of this style in ages. bring on more dreams.



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