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Oh mister red fish
won't you
 swim with me
cuz I'm lonlier than ever
with a thought of depression
that no one can measure

Hey there mister hang man
do you feel like a swinger?
finding every human
and see if you can swing them

hey mister hang man
your the only guide
who will give me a mask
and cover my eyes

while you take me to the other side


hey mister thought
that came to me
through the pot
with a promise for life

and here I am
Stuck in limbo
with no hope
for a better high
as I'm stuck in the lowest low
and I'm never going to be that high again



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On Monday June 26th, 2006, dying angel (1308) writes:
"Hey there mister hang man do you feel like a swinger" i dont know why but that made me laugh. i know it probably wasnt meant for laughter but im glad it made me smile. and im sorry for totally ruining the meaning of this peice.


On Monday June 26th, 2006, dying angel (1308) writes:
now on a serious note: i really liked the sarcasm in this it showed that you are fed up and that its just getting to be a daily hassle. i think its up to us to bring ourselves back to that high point again. stay strong.


On Monday June 26th, 2006, Guillotine (222) writes:
Will the Guillotine do? (haha) - very good work this, i like the scheme and the intrigue. ~Guill


On Monday June 26th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2393) writes:
with me?...great little offbeat poem!!!


On Monday June 26th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2393) writes:
this had a strange soliloquy(?) effect on me..i picture you..or somebody..sat cross legged on a stage reciting this..as weird mebers of intellegentsia look through shades and steamy shards of cut smoke drinking samboukas and...what the hell is wrong with


On Monday June 26th, 2006, MelvinOliverDrauma (546) writes:
I found this poem to be quite intirguing your use of stagered rhyme sucked me in.....cool poem....good job



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