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When we were young
The sky was too high
now we've grown up
we've gone too high for the sky
It's a crazy site
Watching the clouds of innocence rise like steam from water
we've gone to high to find the ground and look up at the sky
Even now as we look down to see the green grounds of innocence
we only see the coulds of what we once thought was fiction
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you know, now that I read this, I really don't thinks it's any good, this first part was great.... but the rest is about as good as being drunk in utah, I think I will leave it at this



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On Saturday November 17th, 2007, just breath (53) writes:
Well i think it is very insightfull and just brings you back down to earth! who the bloody hell do we really think we are...hmmm!


On Sunday September 18th, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:
well yea it is kinda like that but still its beautiful you are my favorite poet ^_^



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