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"The rhymes of Mr. Military" by BloodySparrow

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Your Scandalous and Vandalous
and too soft to handle this
Judging me with tight pressed lips
putting me your blog hit list
didn't hit the mark you missed
it's time for you to cease and desist

Because When I lost my soul in vietnam
I lived to see the soilders crawl
and when you've seen one war
you have seen them all
and then you'll be worthy
of a tax-free mall


© 2007 BloodySparrow

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On Thursday November 22nd, 2007, Army Barbie (478) writes:
Salsa huh? Well, this just humored me. I could say it lol'd me...but I didn't really laugh out loud. It's more like... inside the mind chuckle. How does imc sound? Sweet, that's what I thought.


On Tuesday November 27th, 2007, BloodySparrow (63) writes:
Salsa? I'm surprised you imc'd at my work, I've read some of your stuff (way better than anything of mine), and it seems we're worlds apart... After reading your more recent works, I would of thought you'd hate this. It's fairly shallow, based on a fictional character that exposes my lack of understanding of the military


On Tuesday November 27th, 2007, BloodySparrow (63) writes:
I hope you wern't imc'ing because I made an ass of myself


On Thursday November 29th, 2007, Army Barbie (478) writes:
Never. Just imc'd because I don't mind other's opinions. We're all entitled. And it was just humorous. Then again, my sense of humor is alot different then most.


On Thursday November 29th, 2007, Army Barbie (478) writes:
Than* most



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