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P.O.S Sideline Kick.

I'm getting
Really tired of hearing
How great
I seem to be
(from far outside)

And then
Once i let you in
Take a step back
(Before i fucking scare you off)

Yeah,
I'm really pissed off,
This peice of work
(this poem/me)

Is a peice of shit.

It's getting
oh so very Annoying
To see
Everyone together
(From the sideline)

I'm
Hurting
From
The
Haze
In
My
Mind

This is so worthless
I've run out
Of space,
Here on Darkpoetry.com

And so you see,
I Can't delete
What i hurt
Into being.

And that makes this
Utterly inadequate
For an ending.

But if you hate
(This poem/me)
I Won't hold a grudge
(i do to)

I can drag
you on
and on
With my words

But i only want
To drag you down
And farther down
To choke you
Into respect/pity

Because
Here from the outside
(These sidelines)
(that i look in from)
All i want

Is someone to fucking see me
And turn away,
Because it's harder
Alot harder,
When you take your time.
To gawk. Wide eyed.

I'm just another
Fit.in Fall.out
Beautiful
Girl

(Stuck on the sideline)

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On Sunday October 2nd, 2005, evolve (2229) writes:

..mm..your fury is something I find myself sputtering and choking on..I could identify with that last line, so very much..christ, lady.

On Friday September 30th, 2005, MidSummers Eve (46) writes:

This is really well done, i like how it flows, and the words don't let you go until your done.

On Thursday September 29th, 2005, serotonin lost (219) writes:

if you want space i have plenty of room on mine... as for the poem. have you ever concidered moving the side line back? so if they want to "gawk" they have to actually be closer to you? love the whole hatred feel to this though.

On Thursday September 29th, 2005, Err0r (574) writes:

Theres nothing I can say that hasn't already been said, but it's a very nice write.

On Thursday September 29th, 2005, Possesion (192) writes:

I'm sorry Bard, that you actually missed what i was saying...and only caught the DP line.

On Thursday September 29th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:

i think that most DP members experience these emotions at some stage. You're coming down off the initial high of feeling welcomed and new...

On Thursday September 29th, 2005, redtearswhitesnow (90) writes:

I heart you bard.

On Thursday September 29th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:

...a somewhat bitter realisation kicks in that a lot of people here don't know or care about you (except in wanting you to read their stuff)...

On Thursday September 29th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:

...and then you run out of Fucking Space, forcing you to either: a) delete existing poems that new-found friends commented on. b) upgrade your account and don't eat for a few weeks. c) stop posting due to the inherent suckiness of options a&b

On Thursday September 29th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:

...i realise that this rant has not helped matters and i apologise for it.

On Thursday September 29th, 2005, Possesion (192) writes:

Actually, the feelings weren't spurred by DP at all, i was just in a reaaaally pissed mood over getting ripped off by a friend over some shoplifted items. . I Think though that that initial high feeling of welcoma is long passed, and i rather prefer it th

On Thursday September 29th, 2005, Possesion (192) writes:

*from bottom* Spurred on my anger at having to watch everyone else from across the way...If you get what im saying bardy.

On Thursday September 29th, 2005, Possesion (192) writes:

*..that way, i like fading to the background, it's just my way, infact on DP i'm making a few, quiet, friendships. So i hardly feel the bitter realisation. Though i went to post a poem (the beginnings of this one) to find i was out of space. that just spu

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