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Winged glory, Label her an 'Angel'..
But she doesn't beleive in 'God' ..
And the pain of her cruci.fiction,
Burns into the soul..
Flesh searing, Body aching,
Scorching, char broiled,
Burnt to Ash and Cinder.
But her wingspan is 8ft.
So in her innocence.incineration,
She soars without moving,
Until preened feathers curl with heat,
Determination.Will to keep going,
The taunts and jeers, of onlookers..
Throwing stones and flaming arrows.
She won't ever be the same,
As her scarred.marred and imperfect.perfection
Skin is looked upon..
But to 'believers', She is still shrouded,
In winged beauty, as she soars..
So far above the heavens
That her breath is felt on earth,
As the sky implodes into welcoming her
Welcome ice fire of pure innocent exuberance..
But since her incineration,
Those sweet cool tones have changed,
Into a dark heat wave.
She burns a new path.



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On Sunday October 2nd, 2005, blue (1707) writes:
puh..puh..powerful! You've an intelligent style of writing for one so young.. my compliments to you. ~b


On Sunday October 2nd, 2005, toy soldier (38) writes:
wow, i wish i had that kind of will power. good write. i dig.


On Tuesday September 13th, 2005, Esau (288) writes:
this makes me think of my own idea, "keep going no matter what." don't let people stop you. wonderful.


On Tuesday September 13th, 2005, MidSummers Eve (46) writes:
New paths are the most fulfilling, but the most traumatic as well. Continue down your path or you'll always ask, "What if...?"...I loved it btw, nicely done.


On Monday September 12th, 2005, Doc (180) writes:
i like the religious undertones, makes me think of small town poetry. The underlying symbolism is mysterious, such that I wish I knew the person being written about better. Very well done.


On Saturday September 10th, 2005, girlafraid (576) writes:
the last line was excellent, it really brought everything together in a seamless way. nice work...


On Saturday September 10th, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1040) writes:
Oh my gosh...this is beautiful in every way...I just...wow, I'm speechless. Amazing piece. *Evangel*


On Saturday September 10th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (461) writes:
wow this is really damned good. The underlying story, the analogy i imagine, is so perfect, so powerful and heartfelt. The angel cannot be killed or even mortally harmed but the ordeal has changed her, made her stronger.


On Saturday September 10th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (461) writes:
...the way you've used pro(a)gressive punch.uation was very well done. Not excessive. Just right. I like it as it allows multiple readings... offering two perspectives in one sentence, like.


On Saturday September 10th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (461) writes:
ah. it's lovely. that's it. "Wafn" (that's how a grade 3 kid spelt wonderful for me once) :)


On Saturday September 10th, 2005, Possesion (182) writes:
..."fuzzy mold like on cheese"...


On Saturday September 10th, 2005, redtearswhitesnow (92) writes:
Nice images on this one.



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