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burning, aching, feet aflame.
running, faster, breathing harsh.
tearing through memories, faster.
anger rises, vile acid rises further.
hounds, vicious, immune to pains.
chasing, nipping at the heels, of the poor.
unescapable, running faster, farther, breathing.
sharp, pain collides into your soul, your body.
every ounce of you moving on but not slowed.
body screaming, heels bleeding, heart pounding.
hope, light, fresh air, collect into your lungs, taken in.
but too late, because you've stopped running,
hounds first, the back of your leg, taking you down faster.
swarming, and alarming howl rising, hatred, ferocious screams.
one by one tearing out the heart, one by one taken down,
the world bearing down, devouring my heart, stealing my soul,
I no longer run to escape, i run to chase, to kill.



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On Saturday November 15th, 2008, EmmalineRoselund (17) writes:
I actually liked the visual effect on the page, how it tapered upwards. It was almost as if, the more panicked the writing got, the more words you had to fit into a line, like you felt like you were running out of time. And the fact that the final line is shorter instills a sort of cold calm. I like.


On Friday April 14th, 2006, An Expired Member (3) writes:
that one is kool


On Tuesday September 13th, 2005, MidSummers Eve (46) writes:
i like the switch at the end, you joined that which chased you, and chase in kind.


On Saturday September 10th, 2005, An Expired Member (25) writes:
My god, what a lot of words! use them wisely


On Thursday September 1st, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (469) writes:
this is a good read... excellent fast paced action and horror...


On Thursday September 1st, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (469) writes:
...i think it can be even better, however... more work can be done on the flow of it. There are several long sentences in amongst the short bursts of fear and pain...


On Thursday September 1st, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (469) writes:
...i think either shorten them or put them in one group... perhaps a bunch of longer sentences as time slows down at the moment of capture/death...


On Sunday August 28th, 2005, abattoir (144) writes:
adrenaline...this poem is badass...


On Monday August 15th, 2005, Doc (184) writes:
Thats probably the best one ive read yet. My heart started beating quickly as thepoem progressed.


On Wednesday August 17th, 2005, Possesion (189) writes:
Awh, I'm glad it's good, I often find myself looking it over questionably.


On Sunday August 7th, 2005, capt_funguy (993) writes:
this was cool ... your ceaseless stream without a breath was a nice touch in making this a " run through" as well as a read through ... dug the freedom you write with .... funguy



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