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EVOL

Your kisses
are the snow
that
falls upon my face

so
soft
so
intricate

an unforgivable feeling
I have
when in your arms

as I gaze into
your darkness
I
see myself
falling
into an emotion
I fear
the most

Love

I'm falling in Love
with
you

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On Thursday October 27th, 2005, An Expired Member (4) writes:

WONDERFUL imagery: kisses as snow falling upon your face: it conveys the softness and delicacy of them. Very beautiful.

On Thursday October 27th, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1072) writes:

*sighs* wow...rhyme...ugh...no, no rhyming...this is a perfectly perfect piece of work and it needs not be changed...So yeah, this is wonderful. Couldn't agree with doll more. *Evangel*

On Thursday October 27th, 2005, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:

*rolls eyes* since when does rhmying made a poem good? i know alot of poems that rhyme and sound like mentally retarded dr suess. anyway, this poem was lovely. i really liked the falling sensation it created. it does not need rhyming, i dont think it woul

On Thursday October 27th, 2005, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:

d really work with the subject. nice write.

On Thursday October 27th, 2005, Gold Dust Woman (170) writes:

nice write. but i dont see any ryhmes in this poem. try to have a few ryhming words.

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