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Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...

One motion…
One breath……
The bump bump bump
And the HEAT! HEAT! HEAT!!!!!!!!!!
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm…………

Never gone this way
All the way
Down on the high way
FASTER
FASTER
Spin my head faster
Make the world one big huge blur
Swirling
Curling
Hope I don’t star hurling

My hair is not strait no more
My love has condensed on the floor
Sliding
Gliding
I feel life subsiding
Surreal
I feel

Love in the most concrete way!

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On Sunday September 11th, 2005, Gideon Lost (189) writes:

This makes me dizzy to read. I like the pace of it though. Good Write. -Gideon

On Sunday September 11th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (473) writes:

i totally agree. this spun me out.

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, TheBardOfBlasphemy (473) writes:

i also agree. It's crazy to read, especially because of the queer sexual under/over-tones. Good to see again.

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