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Mistake

As I lay here by my lonesome
I ask myself why I was so dumb
I must be blind to not have seen it
So what I deserve is what I'll get

An eternity of heartbreak
An eternity of pain
An eternity of loneliness
Which will sure drive me insane

He never should have got to me
I never should have cared
All the lies he spoke to me
All the weaknesses he bared

I was supposed to go away
But my heart told me otherwise
So I hesitated for just a moment
And I met my demise

For eternity I'll suffer
For the mistakes that I have made
Just because I fell in love
Doesn't mean I should have stayed.

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On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, edenscancer (46) writes:

another phenominal piece.

On Wednesday August 23rd, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

Beautifully heartwrenching. Great job! Julia~

On Tuesday August 22nd, 2006, K_Love (691) writes:

I know this feeling all too well, stingingly beautiful write. I felt this one as it hit home.

On Tuesday August 22nd, 2006, An Expired Member (45) writes:

This is a very good poem. Hopefully you'll someone who cares about you and loves you. You are also a very good writer.

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