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"Certain Uncertainty" by l mo

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He loves me,
He loves me not.
Should I leave,
Or should I not.
 
My mind is filled
Up to the brim
With confusing thoughts,
All about him.
 
Sometimes he's great-
A real prince charming,
But then sometimes
He acts alarming.
 
He confuses me
More so than ever
Should I stay with him
Until forever?
 
This sounds quite harsh
Its not meant to be
I just want you to know
I want you to see
 
I love him more
Than any boy
He is my world,
My life, my joy.

Pease listen close
Listen hard
I am not mad
But I'm not unscarred
 
Sometimes your words
Cut like a knife
And make me want
To take my own life
 
My mind is filled
Up to the brim
With certain uncertainty
Over him.





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On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Guillotine (232) writes:
the fact that you managed to pull of a rhyming piece and me ejoy it, labels this as an excellent, indepth piece of writing! ~Guill


On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Magic Hatter (2380) writes:
I really like the brevity of language that takes the message of the poem straight ot the heart and lets the fellings flow in a kind of rhymthic questioning.Very nice my friend.


On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Sanctuary (84) writes:
A well written piece and the meaning and vision are not lost upon me. Well versed


On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Fornever_Never (264) writes:
I know this feeling all to well !!!!! great read and wonderful write


On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Ainsof (1731) writes:
wow, very perfect... in structure and rhyme and expressing a universal appeal as well, neat



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