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I'll Be With You Soon

Wide awake with nothing to do.
Bored stiff,
I'm talking to you....

You left my heart in peices,
That I am not able to pick up.
I had so much to tell you,
Why did you make that final cut?

I stand at your grave,
Unable to cry,
I wish you were here
Why did you die?

So much to tell you,
I hope you can here me.
If you hadn't gone and killed yourself,
Think about how happy we'd be.

Words unsaid
Tears unshed,
I hope for the chance
To see you again.

Wide awake with nothing to do,
I've made my decision,
I'll be with you soon.

One quick swipe,
Soon we be,
Together again,
Happily.

One again I feel
The sensation
Of metal on flesh
I wish for death.

Wide awake with nothing to do,
My eyes fade,
I'll be with you soon....

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On Tuesday August 23rd, 2005, l mo (63) writes:

I just want to clear a few things up... THIS IS NOT BASED ON ME! My friend lost someone very close to her this summer because they killed themselves. She was talking to me about how if one more person dies on her, she would kill herself. And, yes, I know

On Tuesday August 23rd, 2005, l mo (63) writes:

I know it's not a good idea to kill yourself over someone, that's what I told her. Luckily, she listened.

On Monday August 22nd, 2005, peril_notion (123) writes:

*claps*

On Sunday August 21st, 2005, Unbridled Pain (65) writes:

I don't think anyone is saying it's good that he wants to die to be with the one he loves, rather it's good that he can express his feelings. Most of us have had a feeling like this, but the more intelligent of us find a way to live through it. Six is rig

On Sunday August 21st, 2005, Unbridled Pain (65) writes:

Six is right, it is completely stupid to kill yourself over someone, but it is not an idiotic feeling, just human nature. - U.P.

On Sunday August 21st, 2005, l mo (63) writes:

I'm a girl....

On Monday August 22nd, 2005, Unbridled Pain (65) writes:

how right you are...sorry. So just replace every he with a she and we'll be happy.

On Sunday August 21st, 2005, Six-Out (1823) writes:

I was refering mainly to the comment of saying that a .45 was a better choice, or something.

On Sunday August 21st, 2005, Unbridled Pain (65) writes:

On Sunday August 21st, 2005, Doc (189) writes:

i agree strongly with six on that, but it doesnt diminish the power of your work

On Sunday August 21st, 2005, l mo (63) writes:

thanks

On Sunday August 21st, 2005, Six-Out (1823) writes:

Killing yourself over anyone for any reason is completely stupid. This is not original, as others have said, and people should not be saying it's 'good' that you want to die. Fucking idiotic. Life is too good to throw away over another being.

On Sunday August 21st, 2005, Doc (189) writes:

.45 was my choice

On Saturday August 20th, 2005, NumbInside (37) writes:

This is amazingly original, unlike anything I've read. its so good

On Saturday August 20th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:

good work... "I'm talking to you..." to a dead person... "I'll be with you soon..." the final meeting place... spooky write

On Saturday August 20th, 2005, An Expired Member (1) writes:

after reading this i went and huged my loved ones.......... sometimes u know when someone doesnt hug back...........

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