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"You Tore My Heart To Peices When You Said You Didn't Love Me" by l mo

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                            y o u t o r e m y h e a r t
                        t o p e i c e s w h e n y o u s a i d
                  y o u d i d n t l o v e m e y o u t o r e m y
            h e a r t t o p e i c e s w h e n y o u s a i d y o u
      d i d n t l o v e m e y o u t o r e m y h e a r t t o p e i c
e s w h e n y o u s a i d y o u d i d n t l o v e m e y o u t o r e m
y h e a r t t o p e i c e s w h e n y o u s a i d y o u d i d n t l o
      v e m e y o u t o r e m y h e a r t t o p e i c e s w h e n y o
            u s a i d y o u d i d n t l o v e m e y o u t o r e m y
                  h e a r t t o p e i c e s w h e n y o u s a i d y
                        u o d i d n t l o v e m e y o u t o r e m y
                              h e a r t t o p e i c e s w h e n y
                                    o u s a i d y o u d i d n t
                                          l o v e m e y o u t
                                               o r e m y h e
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On Thursday October 27th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1248) writes:
Very emotional, the repetitive words just burn into my eyes.


On Saturday August 20th, 2005, glasshouse (802) writes:
hmmm... if you look at it long enough... it looks like one of those magic eye things. i can see all sorts of things in there. but seriously... i can see where tim is coming from. i like the line and the format. -Glass


On Saturday August 20th, 2005, l mo (63) writes:
yeah...it was supposed to be a heart, but it wouldn't work....


On Saturday August 20th, 2005, suicideseason (2145) writes:
This exhibits your frustration and dejection so well...like a blinding neon sign...like you hammered each letter as you typed it...beat the living hell out of your keyboard...like you broke the pen and ripped the hell out of your notebook...


On Saturday August 20th, 2005, suicideseason (2145) writes:
...as you wrote these words over and over and over...I feel it all.Thank you.


On Sunday August 21st, 2005, l mo (63) writes:
actually, when I wrote it in my notebook, my pen actually broke because I was literally squeezing it to death...


On Sunday August 21st, 2005, l mo (63) writes:
...and this is actually something that I wrote about a year ago. My ex-boyfriend was an idiot who let his friends dictate who he dated...


On Sunday August 21st, 2005, l mo (63) writes:
...I would just tell them to fuck off, but he was apparantly to scared to do so....



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