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Lust

A fall
so deep
missed love
fell hard
on lust
broke my neck
paralyzed my heart
relied on the lust
beneath me
slept with the lust
deceived me
trusted the lust
betrayed me
cried over lust
died over lust
turned cold after
falling on the lust
looked over
towards the
missed opportunity
missed target
missed love

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On Sunday December 30th, 2007, Kui (730) writes:

I like this alot!...-Gin

On Wednesday July 27th, 2005, ApathysKiss (463) writes:

this pierced my consciousness like a thousand icicles to realisation. well-written. ~michelle

On Friday March 5th, 2004, Jadedwings (356) writes:

well said!!!!!!!!

On Thursday January 22nd, 2004, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:

a thin line we walk, it is, between love and lust, I often wonder is it was meant to be bred of both? Awesome piece. Yet again.

On Thursday January 22nd, 2004, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:

I like!

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:

whoa. one a thems that sound like you got it bein performed by three or four people in black... its great... -B

On Saturday April 26th, 2003, IceDragoness (251) writes:

You have an obvious talent with words, I'm a young writer too.. at least i think *is 16*, but back to the poetry.. keep up the great work ~Dawn

On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

love can hurt one more than any physical pain can ever do. It's a cursed feeling that can turn on you in the blink of an eye.

On Thursday April 17th, 2003, An Expired Member (32) writes:

this sows a good rhythym of regret and vanity..

On Friday April 18th, 2003, Sky Singer (212) writes:

yes... regret is the knife in our back and vanity the needle in our mind...

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