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Child in the playground sitting in the sand
 Adult on the street corner waving a taxi with her hand
 Child in awe at all the world has to offer
Adult too caught up in work to even bother
Child letting its laughter echo through the sky
Adult gets home from work and loosens up his tie
Child with no cares or a thing to worry about
Adult worrying constantly making themselves stressed-out
Child too content with the present to think of what comes next
Adult makes even the simplest situations overly complex
Child taking a walk down his favorite street
Adult, driving and talking on cell phone- trying to be discrete
Child looks around and thinks the road is clear
Adult, still talking, speeds up and shifts gears
Child sees the perfect opportunity to walk
 Adult driving faster now and continuing to talk
Child struck by a corvette
Adult- still unaware of the damage she’s done yet
Child- dead- “it happened so fast , he didn’t feel any pain”
Adult stumbling over words and trying to explain
Child is a pile of blood, organs, and broken bones
Adult, hears a distant voice and hangs up her cell phone
 Child, life over, one less member of a family
Adult... discovers she’s what’s wrong with humanity



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On Saturday November 17th, 2007, An Expired Member (41) writes:
makes you stop and think. leason learned


On Wednesday August 22nd, 2007, Bridge (340) writes:
damn...the ending just hit too hard..wow


On Friday March 5th, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
man this started off making you long for the innocence of childhood and then turned into something twisted. Good all around message though.


On Sunday August 17th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:
How is it that you are not already on my favorites list? I don't know why, but that's about to change. Your poetry is so deep...I have the utmost respect for you.


On Sunday May 4th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:
Great poem..I enjoyed reading it..excellent.-Thomas


On Wednesday April 30th, 2003, IceDragoness (251) writes:
It took me a bit to realize that the child and adult weren't together, it's so sad how those things you said are true though, good job with it ^.^ ~Dawn


On Sunday April 27th, 2003, Velvet_Raventon (697) writes:
AMAZING! So original and well written! I'll add it to my favourites! Velvet.


On Friday April 18th, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (206) writes:
wondefully written. Tells the truth and brutality of this world, everyones too wrapped up in their own lives to see what pain they cause.


On Thursday April 17th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:
Great and well put. Composed in such an orginal manner in which I've come to expect.I cannot wait till you show us more of your divine works.-Kefka


On Tuesday April 15th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (423) writes:
i love this, great work


On Tuesday April 15th, 2003, An Expired Member (6) writes:
Its a good poem of seeing two different points of view. Very well written.


On Tuesday April 15th, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:
Beautiful. Nice to see someone commenting on the loss of innocence we all have to eventually go through.


On Tuesday April 15th, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (70) writes:
veyr nice poem, very original, thanks for sharing


On Tuesday April 15th, 2003, SnowQueen (64) writes:
I tried to fix the mistakes but it won't changE! bahh...


On Tuesday April 15th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:
Excellent. Well thought out with an important message. Keep them coming.


On Tuesday April 15th, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:
Great poem! Very creative and honest! I really enjoyed reading this peice.



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