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Rape Tally

Kiss me, push your body against mine
Laugh as the young girl in me cries
Force yourself upon me, what your doing is right
Nothing could go wrong, at least it didn’t last night.
Keep up this facade... it’s working for you
Completely ignore every helpless girl that you screw
It’s perfectly normal to steal there virginity!
While you’re at it, why don’t you steal their money?
Creep your dirty hairy hands up their skirts
Fuck each one until they start screaming “THAT HURTS!”
Grin while you push your greasy self deep inside
Every girl is vulnerable: They can run but can’t hide.
Rub your sweaty body hard over each one
Their pain won’t end until your pleasure is done
This is great! Scarring them for life!
You’re doing more damage then you could with a knife!
Quick! Pull out! You can’t leave any evidence!
She’s terrified- the look on her face makes it evident
God that was good... Girl number twenty!
The list goes on, Sonia, Erin, Karen, then Jenny....
mmm...satisfaction... but you’ve only begun!
Look! Right over there! It’s number twenty-one!

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On Sunday June 26th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (319) writes:

sick and twisted. truth be told. -kitty

On Friday May 13th, 2005, Cinn (188) writes:

This was....wow. Reading it was....I dunno, I don't have words for it. Amazing write. -Cinn

On Wednesday March 2nd, 2005, An Expired Member (29) writes:

wow... although it gave me chills i liked it... its almost too real. the point of view of the rapist. nice.

On Monday November 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:

Beautifully written.. Struck home for me. Well done.

On Thursday November 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (61) writes:

i have no idea what to say. i can relate to this and i know how those girls felt and feel. actually made me cry. amazing thats all i can say, and you captured so much emotion in this poem...wow...

On Friday November 5th, 2004, JiNx (142) writes:

umm wow.... makes me think more then I should... nice flow... sad and tragic write... quite good! -JiNx(ie)

On Thursday August 19th, 2004, spaniellie (89) writes:

i dont know what to say. im speechless. honest and painful. great work.

On Saturday August 14th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:

This was so painful to read...in all honesty,I can barely think of what to say,but..I couldn't read this without commenting....the harsh reality of the world we live in...my god,does it hurt.....Butterfly..xxx...

On Monday April 19th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

oh wow..this made me sick....I was raped, so i know how it feels...YOu are A very talented poet...You express your opinions well..great write. -fairy-

On Saturday March 6th, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:

oh god this was so painful...so much reality...

On Saturday March 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (23) writes:

i think you are one of the greateset writers on this site. awesome job i like ur messages

On Saturday March 6th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:

holy mary mother of faithlessness! this was truly a honest and brutal. piece. and i am a sucker for honesty. fucking awesome...

On Friday March 5th, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:

That was even painful to read, rape is worst than murder in my opinion.

On Tuesday February 17th, 2004, An Expired Member (20) writes:

ugh.. I'd rather choose death. Haven't read a "rape poem" in a long time, thanks.

On Monday November 24th, 2003, spaniellie (89) writes:

guys like that are bastards, and we should cut their dicks off... im srry. great write however. much love, *hugs* ~spell

On Tuesday July 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:

Very well writen. Very touchy subject for me, been there gone through all that you can imagin. In short, loved it. Nara...

On Tuesday July 8th, 2003, anathema (62) writes:

rape as violence. my heart goes out to this work, and to you.

On Tuesday May 27th, 2003, An Expired Member (17) writes:

exeptional piece of work. i enjoyed every word of it ~saint

On Sunday May 18th, 2003, Griffin (135) writes:

like all the other comenters said, nice poem, again i feel bad for u if u were raped

On Thursday May 8th, 2003, alone (199) writes:

This is probably one of the best poems i have read for awile...its goin on my favorites...keep up the good work~later

On Friday May 2nd, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:

damn...you definatly have talent. good job, man. it was like i was there.

On Tuesday April 29th, 2003, Markus Porkwing (713) writes:

A grisly portrait of rape. It was very colorful and made me almost cringe.

On Friday April 18th, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (208) writes:

another wondeful thing wrong with this world, yet you put it in words so perfectly, great job, and yeah a very impressive piece

On Thursday April 17th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

Damn well heres quite the subject to write about and you did it quite well.Impressive piece Snow.-Kefka

On Sunday April 13th, 2003, living_dead_girl (11) writes:

wow *jaw drops* that woz wikid! i love ur style, ur such a gud poet!!!!!!! keep it up!~L*D*G

On Sunday April 13th, 2003, braindead_poet (581) writes:

full of disgust; very touchy subject to hit on, but you hit it and you hit it well.

On Sunday April 13th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:

Very powerful. Very real.

On Sunday April 13th, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (341) writes:

Very good! You are one talented poet!

On Sunday April 13th, 2003, An Expired Member (25) writes:

Very good writing....brought tears to my eyes.

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