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She lived in an old house…
A house that was too old and wise to hold a chrysalis like her
Because maturity was waiting in the trenches
She would make mold of something new

To hold the lack of pride hidden behind her locked doors
She’d turn the crisp page in a book
Finding herself in a world of independent thoughts
Losing herself in her own

She speaks in strangled whispers
Cries to herself
When nobody will hear
Because she is sick of being surrounded

She was bruised but not broken
Tired but would not sleep
In pieces but whole
Ten years old and running to twenty

Oh and things were not meant to be this way
Kisses and ballet were hers
But the chemicals in her veins were not
She was worn and jaded

Flowing brown hair and burnt sienna eyes
Watched masks of a mother float above her
As she first made love
Tears would soon have no choice but to break through

The greatness among her was falling down
Her core was tender and wounded
Her weeping would not cease
And her pain was endless

For when a chrysalis becomes a butterfly
The steps taken will damage it beyond repair
She fell too far to come back up
And she will never fly









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On Saturday November 17th, 2007, An Expired Member (41) writes:
all you works are very well writen and they all have great stories behind them like this one.luv it!


On Tuesday May 24th, 2005, Serenity (598) writes:
....! Incrediable. This is beautifully sad.


On Monday November 1st, 2004, JustBnMe (60) writes:
snow, i love your works, they are all so good


On Wednesday May 12th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:
incredibly moving. :)


On Saturday March 6th, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:
this is beautiful...like an unhappy fairy tale...*afraid*


On Saturday March 6th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:
this was so beautiful, but it tells such a tragic story


On Thursday March 4th, 2004, Stranger (281) writes:
I could feel the soft, bare skin of your finger and its sharp nail poking at the raw meat of my heart while I read this. You ability to move me with words is incredible.


On Wednesday March 3rd, 2004, nell (328) writes:
wow, this had the tune of an old sad tale to it, i love the metaphor you use, it's beautiful


On Wednesday March 3rd, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (361) writes:
a very thoughtful, sweet and melancholy piece...so much emotion echoes through this...an amazing read...-l-


On Wednesday March 3rd, 2004, evolve (2297) writes:
I love this dearly.



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