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Autumn's Betrayal

thanks for the title Stranger...

Years filled with your passion
Your touch
The fluttering heartbeats that accompanied us and
Set the tune of our love

My memory speaks of...
The springs we spent seducing each other
The ecstasy you brought me to
In the dead night.. we were shining life.

The secure African lily
In the depth of our golden summer garden
A growth that sealed a romance
A lust that blossomed into a love

Your scent surrounded me
The warmth of your presence
Carried away with the autumn wind
Startled by the sudden cold breeze

My feet stay planted firmly to the ground where we last were...
Because my mind... it’s searching for the moment
That second- where my world was so violently shaken.
My heart... has a softened beat.

The people that pass by me will be in awe
Lost in their wonders
Of what sublime loss I created for myself
How the little girl will ever piece together her crumbled heart

Why this frost?
Why in these short months..
Everything is lost. Everything has turned black.
This monsoon that has taken you and left me alone.

My sweet, lost love.
The mistake I planted will wither and die
Should I be punished? Be forced to melt away with winter’s ice?
How you will miss me...

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On Wednesday March 30th, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:

I forgot how much I enjoyed reading your work.. There seems to be this.. strage sort of familiarity I find in your works whenever I stumble across them. I love this.. and I would love to see new work from you too :)

On Monday November 1st, 2004, JustBnMe (60) writes:

simply beautiful

On Tuesday March 2nd, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:

nice work, most enjoyable.~~~Grave

On Wednesday December 3rd, 2003, dark angel (25) writes:

This is a really great poem. It paints such a beautiful picture in my head; first of love, and then of sorrow. Nice job.

On Tuesday November 18th, 2003, An Expired Member (61) writes:

its so sad... so miserable...

On Saturday October 25th, 2003, WinterGrave (337) writes:

I was reading one of judgments poems (forsaken) and your name cought my eyes, one of my favorite bands (withen Timtation) has a song called IceQueen.this is also my fave poem of yours.~~~Grave

On Monday August 25th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

This was most certainly a reintroduction to your poetry. Its always great to read all those pretty thoughts that are trapped inside your head.-Kefka

On Thursday August 21st, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:

Thank you for another beautiful poem Snow Queen. I hope that this winter does not last forever. A person's heart would have to be made of stone not feel the pain and regret and longing spoken of here.

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

a good title to a good poem. the imagery made me daydream in anime style. i could picture the scene of growth, green fields, and love, suddenly being shaken up, returning to gray skies. beautifully written. :)

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