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Sinfonía de mi Vida

Vision blurred, in the silencing effect
Tears form paths of sorrow
Along my porcelain skin
Violins reflect each ache felt

Wind passing through my body...
Flowing... searching
Crimson clouds in my pale grey sky
Melody gently kisses the tenderness of my open lips

Hands reaching into the night sky
The hurt of abandonment
White fire on the sadness of desolation
Piano plays on...

A pure form...
Innocence seeping through the fingertips
A Spanish love
Pasión acústica

Heart racing....
Anticipation of ecstasy
Temptation pulls my breath deeper
Drums dance alongside my body

As my childhood eyes
Face bittersweet reality
I grow... woman.
In open view of my conductor

Hear the music being thread together
In the seconds...
Frozen moments captured.
A masterpiece of my life

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On Monday March 8th, 2004, Aegis (9) writes:

a splendid flow of aching words. giving the contrast of what music really can be for those... who for example sees the beauty a violin can give. very lovely poem. // thanks.

On Friday March 5th, 2004, BoldSolitude (277) writes:

"Tears form paths of sorrow Along my porcelain skin" I really liked those lines, they drew me in

On Thursday January 8th, 2004, Methos (154) writes:

this is the first work i've read of yours, it is truly amazing..your style, your thoughts..all create such vivid emotions -Great write! - Methos

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:

Very "womanly" poem - beautiful use of seemingly disjointed images and sensations. A more profound use of "Latin flavor" than I've usually seen. Lovely work.

On Monday August 25th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

Written like a true woman would...Though i don't have a clue what the title says. Your poems are always beautiful..-Kefka

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, DarkAyla (57) writes:

Wow, Very, Very nice...I really love everything about it, but the line "Crimson clouds in my pale grey sky" So nice...very good!

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:

*Standing ovation* I think this is your best work yet. I would love to know more about what motivated such beautiful words. The aspects of nature and music were woven together with grace and fluidity. This poem was "a masterpiece of your life".

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, Brenya Rose (190) writes:

This was lovely. Beautiful words wound around music...music, this was great.

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, angelunderneath (75) writes:

Here you made the pain of personal growth look so beautiful. I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:

A little spanish i find "personally" sexy...and i wish i could speak it fluently...I also liked walking in aged wisdom and experience...very sweet

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, _Andrew_ (298) writes:

awesome piece, i especially like how you introduced instruments into this, very nicely written *~*aNDReW*~*

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, eternal despair (72) writes:

very deep, and i can relate to it in a way... well written. thanx for the great read. .::Chérie::.

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