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"The Inevitable Return" by wannabe_rebel

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I keep asking myself why
I'm back here laying at your side,
with the smooth pulse of the bass
and the feel of your face.

You trace your fingers
along my spine,
I can't help but ask myself why.

The pale blue of your eyes
is less like the sky
and more like the ice on the lake.
Like the lips of a drowned girl,
or the delicate blue curl
of smoke that you let
through your mouth, from your cigarette.

You can't stop biting my neck.
I can't fix the emotional wreck
going on in your head,
so we'll lie in this bed
and pretend
it's not already dead.



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On Friday September 2nd, 2005, capt_funguy (993) writes:
the " drowned girl" made the blue vivid with a little startle .. the others mentioned " flow " .. i agree completely ... but more than that , it has dimension ,


On Friday September 2nd, 2005, capt_funguy (993) writes:
but phant nailed it best , you're a quiet "hidden gem" on this site ... beutiful truths ... funguy


On Tuesday August 30th, 2005, An Expired Member (33) writes:
This flows so nicely good work


On Tuesday August 30th, 2005, abattoir (144) writes:
everytime I read another one of your works I'm more amazed than before.I agree with Melvin, DAMN...


On Thursday July 21st, 2005, ApathysKiss (459) writes:
i love how this flows...subdued for such a tumultuous moment.


On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, purr_verse (1427) writes:
very nicely written, this; fine construction and just really very impressive all around. :)


On Sunday July 17th, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (548) writes:
damn.....


On Tuesday July 12th, 2005, Linwe (29) writes:
This will be one of my faves!


On Tuesday July 12th, 2005, stormtalk (884) writes:
A well-hidden gem... I'll have to read more of your work, you're very good.



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