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i have a glorious mess on my
.bold.canvas.
spare me some twilight moments,
let me rest peacefully.
i need to relax, let go, free myself.
accomplish me something, woman.
suffer I may, but suffer evering else,
it may.
i am no longer dealing with "organized chaos."
NO.
it's just chaos.
disaray of...
her, him, this, that.
I NEED AN OUTLET.
teach me to relax,
help me let go. (of everything)
.WITHDRAW.
paint me something serene,
  and make it snappy
(i can't calm down)
the important things are
.failing.
so much intensity, it only means
ONE THING-

nothing is going to get done.



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On Tuesday May 23rd, 2006, evolve (2293) writes:
The tension in this write is spelled out on my nerves..this was me yesterday.


On Wednesday May 17th, 2006, Nail Bunny (227) writes:
OOOH... I like it! it is sortof intangible, what i think about it, but please know that i enjoyed it immensley


On Tuesday May 16th, 2006, Thorn (436) writes:
I do hope the fun times and good moods of late have helped you feel better. ♥♥♥


On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Vexed (108) writes:
calming down, relaxing, those two things not happening speaks to me of the past week I have lived and yet there is a time and a place relaxation actually reaches for you...


On Sunday May 14th, 2006, dying angel (1328) writes:
"(i can't calm down)/the important things are .failing." the ending was great. and that line just blew me away.


On Sunday May 14th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2409) writes:
like the ironing or dishes? Nothing much gets done here either ha ha - ok thats a tripe comment sorry. I dont know if I can teach you to relax -try radox I guess? Chaos theory in practice.


On Wednesday June 28th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2409) writes:
what a dweeb this guy is..idiot, move over and let me comment..tsk tsk..Jill..well done, crazy poem!!



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