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"Night, Knight" by PoeticHellion

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You're my knight,
My knight glittering in the light.
Cold,
Black,
Desolate,
Waiting...
Night.
Shining and smiling,
And moving quickly towards me...
My knight.
Scoops me up in his...
No in your...
Arms.
Sensless preceedings
Mindless heartbeatings...
Feeling free...
Feeling need...
Loved.
Hand-over-hand,
Carve your name in a
Heart,
In a tree,
In public,
Let 'em know you got her...
No wait... me.
Let 'em see that "ain't nobody
Gonna get her."
Yeah that'll show those raging...
Scoundrals.
They'll just pretend
That they are just
As good
As you.
And you, you won't even
Be able to stop them.
Of course NOT.
Not if they get to me first.
But, we still sit here,
Hand-over-hand,
Carving our names
In a heart,
In a tree,
That same DAMN tree,
And you hope,
You Believe,
That you'll still be my knight.
"Yes," she--no I reply.
"You'll be my night."
Cold.
Black.
Desolate...
Still waiting?




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On Monday April 2nd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:
amazing, just like how the cure came on the radio right now. you dont write enough.


On Tuesday April 3rd, 2007, PoeticHellion (250) writes:
I write more than it looks like. I just don't post much.


On Thursday December 7th, 2006, Rain In The Willows (853) writes:
this is lovely. So awesome, I can't help but smile over it... ♥ *


On Wednesday June 28th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2409) writes:
I like the pull of the punching owrds..stamped across my eyes and still attacking the senses..well created and a strong climax..well done Jill!!


On Monday March 20th, 2006, evolve (2293) writes:
I'm left in suspense.. this read both charming and somehow haunting.. not sure how you pulled that off, but you did it beautifully.


On Friday February 17th, 2006, Philla (139) writes:
*breathless* Your descriptions and words are just beautiful. -*Philla*-


On Saturday February 18th, 2006, PoeticHellion (250) writes:
Wow. Thank you. Most of the words just kind of... came to me.


On Thursday February 2nd, 2006, Thorn (436) writes:
This is still one of the BEST poems I have ever read. Why are there no comments??


On Sunday December 18th, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:
"Sensless preceedings Mindless heartbeatings...". i love the way this piece flows from line to line so perfectly. the ending is dreamy and lovely. . well written words darling


On Thursday September 8th, 2005, MidSummers Eve (46) writes:
good, elegant but simple


On Sunday July 10th, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (552) writes:
this poem allmost has an indeering quality under a dark and depressing overtone


On Saturday July 9th, 2005, down-sx-ft (50) writes:
nice, I like it



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