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Sweet music box dancer
Turns and turns
In the darkness
Of this lonely room
No ears to perceive
This cherished lullaby
For such joy
Doesn’t exist here any longer

Echoes in this empty place
Such silence screams so loudly
Permeating its audience
Smiles of pleasing recognition
Gives way to the misery of remembrance
Each tear that flows
Marking a line to its escape
Freefall crashing to the ground
Sending the sprays of liquid melancholy
In Every direction
Absorbed and fed into
The desolate emotions
That linger within

This room,
This lonely room,
Once flooded with life
Now lies empty
Where only sadness lives
And memories die




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On Thursday November 2nd, 2006, carlosjackal (1614) writes:
"Sweet music box dancer/Turns and turns/In the darkness" Fantastic opening to an excellent and sad poem.


On Thursday November 2nd, 2006, CorruptedLittleGirl (348) writes:
You created this atmosphere beautifully. Could it be symbolic of a heart or soul? Anyway, excellent write.


On Thursday November 2nd, 2006, An Expired Member (32) writes:
i like it "where sadness lives and memories die" this has to be my favorite line


On Thursday November 2nd, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1061) writes:
Heartbreaking. "sprays of liquid melancholy"... wow! That line stood out for me. As always, well done, and then some!! Julia~


On Thursday November 2nd, 2006, Hello Dead Kitty (69) writes:
several rooms such as this one so eloquently described exist in my head...will they ever be filled with joy again? very good prose....


On Thursday November 2nd, 2006, Instant Insanity (773) writes:
I love your last stanza. Excellent expression of emotion. Sadness Lives, and memories die. Wow. Thats powerful ][][


On Thursday November 2nd, 2006, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
you have a distinct poise...a very thoroughbred way of saying things and the impact you engrave...carved lines on my heartstone....excellent work monsieur...truly sublime



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