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From the night skies
Fell a cool, early autumn rain
Descending the window
Like angelic tears on the face of sadness

The crackle of the fire within
Warms me, while the hypnotizing rhythms
Sooth the weary mind

With eyes closed
Away the spirit flies
While the doors inside me, open
Lifting the darkened veil
To a beautiful dream
Bathed in such sweet rapture

Two worlds intertwined
Beating as one




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On Saturday February 24th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2383) writes:
sweet rapture says it all....me believes


On Wednesday September 13th, 2006, Bluegirl (255) writes:
decadent.


On Sunday September 10th, 2006, xDollx (46) writes:
Beautiful write, the verse "The crackle of the fire within Warms me, while the hypnotizing rhythms Sooth the weary mind" really caugth my eye =]


On Sunday September 10th, 2006, Soulfire (112) writes:
**Like angelic tears on the face of sadness** Absolutely beautiful


On Sunday September 10th, 2006, Magic Hatter (2383) writes:
hypnotized by the otherly lullaby assuage..this poem is a perfect way to step into autumn's mysteriousness.....and welcome back...Col.


On Sunday September 10th, 2006, urbanhumility (1325) writes:
a beautiful swift action........your imagery delivers here..........well done............urban


On Sunday September 10th, 2006, elisa (1981) writes:
to be... completely absorbed by another....the absolute base of two beings, amalgamated....intimacy at it's best....beautiful write.


On Sunday September 10th, 2006, Magic Hatter (2383) writes:
yes. Exactly


On Sunday September 10th, 2006, blue (1779) writes:
A perfect surrounding and release, though, I took it as an inner awakening to the deeper world within/without.. but then I awoke to the seventh dimension today ;) And high praise for bringing so much with so few words. This.. is poetry friends. ~b



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