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"Shivering in the night" by down-sx-ft

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A down pour of rain
Shivering in the night
Flashing memories of pain
Emotions of fright
Heart racing quick
Stars fading fast
Stomach growing sick
Seconds going fast
No one around
Head starts to ache
Laying on the ground
The Earth begins to quake
Fear flowing through
Tears mixing in
Hurt and confused
Alone again
Trying to hold on
Wanting to go
Fuck it I'm done
Red River Flow


© 2006 down-sx-ft

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On Friday October 6th, 2006, Ideas (56) writes:
I love the speed of this and the descriptions of how the emotions affect you physically.


On Sunday May 14th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:
the solitude feel of this piece really 'shivers' through -that feeling of isolation and abandonment - I suppose that was what you wished to convey here - its very sombre and yet the short lines make it contrastingly tender.



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