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Red River Flow

Eyes open wide
Still I see
Still I find
No one around me

Hurting pain
Depressing reality
Cut the vein
Feel the fatality

No one cares
Slice and be
Out of here
Away and free

Let blood seep
Create a scar
Cut it deep
Into your arm

Red river flow
Out from the vein
Fall down below
Get rid of the pain

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On Friday January 6th, 2006, Alec Pure (332) writes:

this was awesome good job....~~gap~~

On Tuesday August 30th, 2005, Possesion (189) writes:

Indeedy, it was good.

On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (468) writes:

good rhyming... the last verse was really intense

On Wednesday July 13th, 2005, thornyrose (29) writes:

at a loss with this one..very deep and intense...

On Sunday July 10th, 2005, An Expired Member (31) writes:

Hmm.. It hurts to hear. I know what it's like...

On Sunday July 10th, 2005, Serenity (592) writes:

Cliche

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