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3rd Times A Charm

Confused and suffering
Left with nothing
Arms streched to the sky
Crying out why
To end it all
Down I fall
Lying down in the dirt
Take away the hurt
Barrel to my head
1 "click", 2 "click", 3 "BOOM"... dead

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On Monday July 25th, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:

very to the point , once again a sad piece definitely, but the simple words illustrate the bare emotion. well done.

On Friday July 8th, 2005, Mahakala (255) writes:

wicked...

On Thursday July 7th, 2005, down-sx-ft (50) writes:

it malfunctioned for a min. I got it right though.. 3rd times a charm ya know

On Thursday July 7th, 2005, ShardsofSilence (327) writes:

sweet

On Thursday July 7th, 2005, little butterfly (43) writes:

this was great im trying not to laugh at the gun not going off the first two times

On Thursday July 7th, 2005, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:

i like it...the last line reminds me of a song i like..although i cant remember the name or who sings it..and i've felt this way many times...nice write -Kel

On Thursday July 7th, 2005, ShardsofSilence (327) writes:

yeah nice rhyme scheme ^__^

On Thursday July 7th, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (548) writes:

sweet

On Thursday July 7th, 2005, Ablebody Peckawood (44) writes:

This poem rocks I like it!

On Thursday July 7th, 2005, bloody LOVEly (112) writes:

good rhyme scheme. even though this is one of those "AUGH, i want to kill myself, gimme the gun!" poems, i liked it.

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