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Years upon years of preparation had gone into this event now unfolding.
The Lonely Poet sat before a blank sheet of paper at his desk, pen in hand,
with lines of concentration across his brow.
 
He had spent many months purifying his mind with the greatest poets of history:
the most prolific, the most renowned, the most bizarre and the most obscure.

He was ready.

Deep inside himself he knew that his entire life had been building towards this moment –
made for this moment.
He was ready to fulfil the goal that would give his life meaning:

The perfect poem.
Once written his life would be complete.

Beads of sweat now lined his forehead.
A multitude of combinations were flying through his mind.
Everything depended upon the first sentence –
the very first word.
Every aspect of the poem had to be perfect.
Each decision was crucial.

The sweat began to pour off his body as he concentrated ever more furiously.
All night the Lonely Poet sat there till the sun slowly crept into his room.
He could sense the quiet awe of angels hovering overhead
as the pen dropped from his aching hand.

Satisfied, he pushed himself away from his desk and the perfect poem,
and walked outside to embrace his death.

Inside, the angels hovered closer,
whispering together as they marvelled at the majesty of his work.

Later, much later, another poet happened across the lonely room.
Feeling inspired, he picked up the pen and began to scribble
over the top of what was once perfection.

The life's work of the Lonely Poet was lost in that moment of creation.

Who was more foolish?
The fool who left a page unmarked and labelled it perfection,
or the fool who thought himself worthy of destroying it?







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On Saturday May 20th, 2006, veingo (569) writes:
Ha! I almost missed it. But then i looked a little closer. Fantastic. ^V^


On Saturday May 20th, 2006, BrokenButterflyWings (31) writes:
lol i really expected something else... but i like it...


On Monday April 24th, 2006, An Expired Member (29) writes:
-oh yeah;brilliant.-silver


On Monday April 24th, 2006, An Expired Member (29) writes:
wow.that's all i wanted to say.-silver


On Friday September 30th, 2005, An Expired Member (6) writes:
i really do like this one. you're freaking great!


On Friday September 30th, 2005, An Expired Member (12) writes:
The fool is the Lonely Poet, in my opinion. I think it's sensible to say that what matters most about a poem is the poem itself. The paper it's on isn't what makes a poem unique, it's the words that make it up. One blank piece of paper is the same as


On Friday September 30th, 2005, An Expired Member (12) writes:
another blank piece of paper, but one poem isn't the same as another poem. As long as the words are the same, the poem made up of those words is the same. Graphitised wall, computer monitor, recycled cardboard, it's all the same if the words are same.


On Friday September 30th, 2005, An Expired Member (12) writes:
The blank piece of paper is just a blank piece of paper. It might be 'complete', but it's not really perfect or unique. But I'm being kind of hypocritical here, as one of my poems here talks about a blank piece of work in a similar tone…


On Friday September 16th, 2005, Philla (141) writes:
This is beautiful! I love how this page looked blank at first until I highlighted it. (Am I just stupid? Cause I find that brilliant) Went along with the poem too. Wonderful job. -*Philla*- (sorry I'm a bit slow on dates)


On Friday September 9th, 2005, Bellezza (26) writes:
Wow...spectacular. Excellent job.


On Sunday September 4th, 2005, Lydia Jade (788) writes:
well said...lol...brilliant work


On Sunday September 4th, 2005, lollipoplips (110) writes:
.......hmmm...I don't get it...oh! There is no perfect poem! okay, okay...i get it now! lol


On Sunday September 4th, 2005, precarious pixie (20) writes:
*speechlessness* i do believe your my hero.inside your mind must be amazing...and completly upside down.


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, SamoneDrone (408) writes:
hmmm... either way i thouroughly enjoyed this write in all its glory. ....-samone


On Friday August 19th, 2005, serotonin lost (223) writes:
the fool that fealt worthy of destroying it, for his crime was arrogance while the poets was ignorance, at least the angels know of the perfect poem..


On Monday August 8th, 2005, vaultgrl (238) writes:
it's a hard choice....great write


On Sunday July 31st, 2005, toy soldier (40) writes:
wow... i dig it.


On Saturday July 30th, 2005, ApathysKiss (466) writes:
hehe well said, you =).


On Saturday July 30th, 2005, Ashlar (258) writes:
speechless...I have no words to describe it...


On Saturday July 30th, 2005, Six-Out (1822) writes:
Both.



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