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Days pass
Autumn’s quite whispers
Leaves the trees in a blush

The days seem to retreat
As night makes its advance
Its long reign is over

My friend is here

And it comforts me
Shortened days
For dwelling on my seclusion

The nights refuge
My harbor for thoughts
Here is where I wait
In my castle in the clouds

I wait here
Anticipating for my time
days will be on my side
life will be worthwhile


One more bitter winter
Out of so many gone
With paradise just miles away

I pray I can make it
 To see Eden’s green garden

For now I am surrounded
By the changes of fall




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On Monday September 12th, 2005, Army Barbie (487) writes:
Your writing is beautiful. What more can I say?


On Monday September 12th, 2005, Thorn (434) writes:
Beautiful write. I really liked some of the imagery.


On Saturday September 10th, 2005, glasshouse (780) writes:
"Shortened days For dwelling on my seclusion" this and the ending really stood out to me. I'll be keeping up with you. Beautifully executed. -Glass


On Saturday September 10th, 2005, Evil (547) writes:
im a little dumbfounded. mostly because of the coffee.. a little cause im sleep deprived.. i dont know what to say. i thought it was beautiful..


On Saturday September 10th, 2005, Evil (547) writes:
you conveyed the seasons well and the wording was exquisite. its a masterpiece of its own. wonderful.. outstanding.



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