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breathe

you call me your own
saying you love me so...

if this is your love
I dont want it

all your comments cut like knives
never healing nor comforting words

they strangle me
I grasp for air
as long as you have your hold on me
I cannot breath

I will never taste a sweet breath
because whether I like it or not
im yours...

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On Monday May 28th, 2007, An Expired Member (12) writes:

i like this its really really good

On Tuesday June 28th, 2005, Evil (547) writes:

this is painful, love. like the tip of a knife to my jugular. it's strange that what you don't say, you write, and what you write, you cannot say. right? this was awesome.

On Tuesday June 28th, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (208) writes:

I like the message in this one. I can definately relate. Nice piece. :-D ~Sara

On Monday June 27th, 2005, An Expired Member (8) writes:

that was a great write i loved it

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