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"On the perforated line" by Nail Bunny

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Cut here
fulfil my desire.
Body awash with
pain,
but the pain of the physical
pales in comparison with the
mental anguish I have been given.

Cut here
in case of emergency,
break skin.
There's blood inside,
crimson tears to shead.
Drops of remorse
rain over the shadowed tatters
of a life once loved.

Cut here
end it all
sleep forever
in the blessed
darkness
empty oblivion
void without knowledge
feeling
existance.

Cut here...


...and die.


...



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On Saturday April 29th, 2006, Ainsof (1845) writes:
I gotta get one of those lines, no doubt... novel idea, I love the concept! and a great write


On Saturday April 29th, 2006, Thorn (430) writes:
I liked the spin on this one. It's more raw and unrefined that normal cutter poems, and I think that truly makes it your own. Congrats, Jake. you've taken an exhausted concept, and put an interesting spin on it to make something that's well worth the time


On Saturday April 29th, 2006, Thorn (430) writes:
*time to read and comment on it


On Friday April 28th, 2006, PoeticHellion (238) writes:
Shitgod, Jakob (I'm aware that that looks German). Well done. I almost want to like... hit something. Very well written, very powerful. But don't you be doing anything like that anytime soon.


On Friday April 28th, 2006, Hello Dead Kitty (76) writes:
fuckin' a...i like the brutality very very much...ya just gotta love these feelings



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